Wisdom
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written contemplation about how people manipulateach us to do things for them byou acting like angels and when they don't need us treat us differently and make us feel worthless.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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A very well-written contemplation about how people manipulateach us to do things for them byou acting like angels and when they don't need us treat us differently and make us feel worthless.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation, Iza.
-I like your topic and story.
-A good opening paragraph.
-The story is developed
well with very good detail,
like the analogy with our kids.
-An excellent conclusion, too.
-I like how you call them "shifters,"
because they certainly can't be trusted!
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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-Very nice image
and presentation, Iza.
-I like your topic and story.
-A good opening paragraph.
-The story is developed
well with very good detail,
like the analogy with our kids.
-An excellent conclusion, too.
-I like how you call them "shifters,"
because they certainly can't be trusted!
-Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much:)
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You are very welcome!
Comment from elchupakabra
I really like the inherent idea behind the piece but the challenge I have with it is that it feels very open ended, like the beginning of a story as opposed to a completed story. Good work nonetheless, good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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I really like the inherent idea behind the piece but the challenge I have with it is that it feels very open ended, like the beginning of a story as opposed to a completed story. Good work nonetheless, good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you and congrats in winning the contest:)
Comment from oliver818
This is a good piece, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a good feel to it. I like the way you contrast so many different things as angels and demons. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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This is a good piece, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a good feel to it. I like the way you contrast so many different things as angels and demons. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting story. However, I note that while you spell "angels" correctly in the title, in the body of the work you repeatedly say "angles." I don't think this was intentional.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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This is an interesting story. However, I note that while you spell "angels" correctly in the title, in the body of the work you repeatedly say "angles." I don't think this was intentional.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2020
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Hi Susan, thank you so much for your review and pointing out that silly mistakes. I have no idea how I ended up writing angels wrong.