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Comment from RShipp
The buzzard said, "What? You don't scare me."
Zack replied, "You don't scare me."
My favorite lines.
I believe you have met the requirements of The Dark writing contest: Write a story where your character is stuck in complete darkness. Fiction only.
Best of luck with the The Dark writing contest.
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The buzzard said, "What? You don't scare me."
Zack replied, "You don't scare me."
My favorite lines.
I believe you have met the requirements of The Dark writing contest: Write a story where your character is stuck in complete darkness. Fiction only.
Best of luck with the The Dark writing contest.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2020
Comment from lancellot
Okay, I like the picture or silhouette of the bird. It has that Alfred Hitchcock vibe to it. I'm assuming its a vulture, and is representing a dark death.
But, picture aside, you need some context. I cannot award credit or a story that is not there. The blank leaves one to imagine, but then we would
create a story in our minds, and not you.
Update:
Story reposted and visible now.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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Okay, I like the picture or silhouette of the bird. It has that Alfred Hitchcock vibe to it. I'm assuming its a vulture, and is representing a dark death.
But, picture aside, you need some context. I cannot award credit or a story that is not there. The blank leaves one to imagine, but then we would
create a story in our minds, and not you.
Update:
Story reposted and visible now.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2020
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HELLO Lancellot: I'm sorry about that. I had to rewrite that story. I cleared the page and wrote it again. The text is there now. See for yourself. Cordially rhonnie69.
Comment from AJ McCall
I liked the rhyming of this little short, and for sure that 'I've come to kill' line sent shivers up my spine. This is a great contest entry. That image of the bird is much scarier than most will realize. :)
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I liked the rhyming of this little short, and for sure that 'I've come to kill' line sent shivers up my spine. This is a great contest entry. That image of the bird is much scarier than most will realize. :)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from trimple
Hello there, Mystery writer.
Ooerr! This has a bit of ole Poe feel about it :)
That nasty ole Buzzard up to his night-time tricks, trying to scare the living daylights out of you.
Glad you overthrew this darstardly beast.
Good luck!
Kind regards
trimple
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Hello there, Mystery writer.
Ooerr! This has a bit of ole Poe feel about it :)
That nasty ole Buzzard up to his night-time tricks, trying to scare the living daylights out of you.
Glad you overthrew this darstardly beast.
Good luck!
Kind regards
trimple
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020
Comment from elchupakabra
My one comment is that this really strikes me as a poem more than it does a short story, but other than that, I enjoyed it and thought it was well done. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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My one comment is that this really strikes me as a poem more than it does a short story, but other than that, I enjoyed it and thought it was well done. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2020