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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "Dinu and Leo"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
17 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It sounds like you pamper your kitties. One thing about a cat/kitty they have a litter box, so to clean you can stay inside the house. A dog must go outside if they need to go potty.
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It sounds like you pamper your kitties. One thing about a cat/kitty they have a litter box, so to clean you can stay inside the house. A dog must go outside if they need to go potty.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from RShipp
'- Shut up, this is my chance to see some real birds and smell some flowers.' and '- We are bro forever so we meow together, kitty power, non?' (These are cute lines for your kitten conversation.)
I do hope, if you go, that these kittens are well trained for the wild. I have not had much success in the 'retrieving' of the kitten once he begins to explore!
Enjoyed.
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'- Shut up, this is my chance to see some real birds and smell some flowers.' and '- We are bro forever so we meow together, kitty power, non?' (These are cute lines for your kitten conversation.)
I do hope, if you go, that these kittens are well trained for the wild. I have not had much success in the 'retrieving' of the kitten once he begins to explore!
Enjoyed.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2020
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, yes, it's fun to watch French TV. I am glad your kitties are so multi-lingual! Hopefully both of them behaved well on the vacation trip! Best wishes in the contest!
One comment:
I want to take my ten months kitties (ten month old)
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Oh, yes, it's fun to watch French TV. I am glad your kitties are so multi-lingual! Hopefully both of them behaved well on the vacation trip! Best wishes in the contest!
One comment:
I want to take my ten months kitties (ten month old)
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed this cute little story about your cats. I also liked the inclusion of French. I'm not fluent in the language, yet I find it fascinating. Your tale reminded me of my dog, Digger, and how much he loves riding to the park. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I really enjoyed this cute little story about your cats. I also liked the inclusion of French. I'm not fluent in the language, yet I find it fascinating. Your tale reminded me of my dog, Digger, and how much he loves riding to the park. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
It is poignant how we hope our new pets will be like our old ones and of course they are their unique selves and kind of a disappointment. I want so much that my new cat would be like my old who's at the Rainbow Bridge. I'm glad at one of your kitties likes to ride. Hepefully, your other will come to enjoy it. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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It is poignant how we hope our new pets will be like our old ones and of course they are their unique selves and kind of a disappointment. I want so much that my new cat would be like my old who's at the Rainbow Bridge. I'm glad at one of your kitties likes to ride. Hepefully, your other will come to enjoy it. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review and support:)
Comment from MissMerri
I love kitties. I also had a cat who hated car rides and would howl and cry the whole time. Of course we soon stopped taking him anywhere other than to the vet. Your story is cute and funny and I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I love kitties. I also had a cat who hated car rides and would howl and cry the whole time. Of course we soon stopped taking him anywhere other than to the vet. Your story is cute and funny and I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like that the kittens are talking back and forth to each other. It gives a little insight into the animal life. However, I did not connect with this piece. Were the cats talking the whole time?
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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I like that the kittens are talking back and forth to each other. It gives a little insight into the animal life. However, I did not connect with this piece. Were the cats talking the whole time?
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Yup:) they do
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Cute flash Fiction for your kitties. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt contest. It's hard to write short stories, you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Hello anonymous
Cute flash Fiction for your kitties. You followed the rules of the contest well. It's a fine entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt contest. It's hard to write short stories, you did a good job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your kind review:)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a perfect entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest! Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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What a perfect entry for the 200 Word Story writing prompt. I do hope this entry does well in the contest! Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-hundred-word story, Dinu and Leo, has the proper word count and gives words to the kittens to give their grievances about staying and going respectively. Cute French twist.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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This two-hundred-word story, Dinu and Leo, has the proper word count and gives words to the kittens to give their grievances about staying and going respectively. Cute French twist.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind review:)