Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "I Know"My book of poems and stories
31 total reviews
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. Blindness is so sad and takes away half a life really. You sum that up well here. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a great day
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is a very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. Blindness is so sad and takes away half a life really. You sum that up well here. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a great day
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thanks for supporting this entry with your kind review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very poignant. It causes the reader to pause and eithernidentify or be challenged to be grateful for their sight. This is amgood wake-up call for us visioned people. Sadly, some will need this reminder. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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This is very poignant. It causes the reader to pause and eithernidentify or be challenged to be grateful for their sight. This is amgood wake-up call for us visioned people. Sadly, some will need this reminder. Thank you.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thanks for supporting this entry with your kind review. Have a great weekend.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
There are many tragedies in life. Being without sight is one. Not being able to hear, or speak,or walk, or read are a few others. It takes one dimension away.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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There are many tragedies in life. Being without sight is one. Not being able to hear, or speak,or walk, or read are a few others. It takes one dimension away.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
And sometimes, those who are blind can "see" so much better with eyes of faith and not be distracted by physical appearances. Beautiful message in your minute poem. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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And sometimes, those who are blind can "see" so much better with eyes of faith and not be distracted by physical appearances. Beautiful message in your minute poem. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
Well done, only God gives the kind of wisdom I see in this poem, a beautifully written and presented minute poem, full of wisdom and reposed in knowledge and skill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Well done, only God gives the kind of wisdom I see in this poem, a beautifully written and presented minute poem, full of wisdom and reposed in knowledge and skill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I appreciate your kind review. Thank you so much.
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Most welcome
Comment from palmart
Thank you for sharing your poetry!! There are progress in your writing that leads reader in one direction but the last line rounds the idea clearly. Image is very expressive and complements your writing perfectly! Good choice!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you for sharing your poetry!! There are progress in your writing that leads reader in one direction but the last line rounds the idea clearly. Image is very expressive and complements your writing perfectly! Good choice!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I appreciate your kind review. Thank you so much.
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You´re very welcome!! Hope you the Best in this contest!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Great awareness of the importance of using our hearing and sight. The children can touch each other in friendship. I had a friend who walked all over town with a white cane. She loved to play guitar and sing. LuIina was a fun grandma. Stars ******************** flylikeaneagle
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Great awareness of the importance of using our hearing and sight. The children can touch each other in friendship. I had a friend who walked all over town with a white cane. She loved to play guitar and sing. LuIina was a fun grandma. Stars ******************** flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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I appreciate your kind review. Thank you so much. The six stars are a great addition and I am very honored.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your minute poem is excellent in all respects--skillfully-composed, descriptive, and so moving. You have captured the very heart of the unsighted person. The artwork is almost indescribably touching.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your minute poem is excellent in all respects--skillfully-composed, descriptive, and so moving. You have captured the very heart of the unsighted person. The artwork is almost indescribably touching.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your support and kind review are so much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A lovely view of the world through the eyes of one who has no sight... well done!! A great employment of the minute form here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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A lovely view of the world through the eyes of one who has no sight... well done!! A great employment of the minute form here -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your support and kind review are so much appreciated.
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Wonderful! Absolutely stunning. Very good job creating this work with the scheme challenged by the prompt. Very good content. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Wonderful! Absolutely stunning. Very good job creating this work with the scheme challenged by the prompt. Very good content. Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Your support and kind review are so much appreciated.