Fall Foliage and Festivities
Four seasons contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed your story of your favorite season. Your descriptions caught my attention and drew me in. I could imagine the colors of the season and the activities you mentioned. Working at an ice cream stand and grill sounds like fun. Very nice details you provided.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
I really enjoyed your story of your favorite season. Your descriptions caught my attention and drew me in. I could imagine the colors of the season and the activities you mentioned. Working at an ice cream stand and grill sounds like fun. Very nice details you provided.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
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Dear writer 723, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from amada
I am glad you selected Autumn becase that is my favorite season as well. I wrote a couple of lines about it...but the liens you write are awesome, I like the best those leaves falling down...peacefully.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
I am glad you selected Autumn becase that is my favorite season as well. I wrote a couple of lines about it...but the liens you write are awesome, I like the best those leaves falling down...peacefully.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Dear amada, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. It is well-written, descriptive with great imagery, and flows smoothly. Readers can easily tell Fall/Autumn is your favorite season. Your many examples of why you like it best support your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. It is well-written, descriptive with great imagery, and flows smoothly. Readers can easily tell Fall/Autumn is your favorite season. Your many examples of why you like it best support your choice.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
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Dear Jan, thank you for your comments and review.