Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "the twilight of history and age,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Adama
This is a thought provoking poem which is well written and has a smooth flow. It's raises questions that I guess we will all be thinking about at some point in our lives. My mother is in the twilight of her years and her favourite saying is, 'I don't know what the world is coming to, I feel really sorry for the young people these days'.
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This is a thought provoking poem which is well written and has a smooth flow. It's raises questions that I guess we will all be thinking about at some point in our lives. My mother is in the twilight of her years and her favourite saying is, 'I don't know what the world is coming to, I feel really sorry for the young people these days'.
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thank you for the review
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I liked the structure of this poetry, and your reflections about the twilight of history and age. This is a beautiful summer poem. I love the picture your have chosen.
Many blessing and best wishes.
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I liked the structure of this poetry, and your reflections about the twilight of history and age. This is a beautiful summer poem. I love the picture your have chosen.
Many blessing and best wishes.
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thank you
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your free verse poetry depicts the plight of the recently retired along with those that are worried about the plight of social security. It is SO sad that the people that made this nation great are paying the highest price for the demise of our infrastructure. The Baby Boomer generation gave and contributed to all of the systems in place, but they will be depleted before their time. It is very sad. ~patty~
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Your free verse poetry depicts the plight of the recently retired along with those that are worried about the plight of social security. It is SO sad that the people that made this nation great are paying the highest price for the demise of our infrastructure. The Baby Boomer generation gave and contributed to all of the systems in place, but they will be depleted before their time. It is very sad. ~patty~
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thanks
Comment from misscookie
This is so true the future of tomorrow is in the hands of our youth today
I love how you express something so important yet countless think nothing of it.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is so true the future of tomorrow is in the hands of our youth today
I love how you express something so important yet countless think nothing of it.
Thank you for sharing.
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thank you
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you very welcome.
Comment from JennieClare
This generation is YOURS - I really like this reflective poem - do the young give the old a second glance I wonder these days. Generations tend to live apart in our culture which is such a shame when they could learn so much of interesting past history. It's the current generations duty to tend for the next generations world. Very thought provoking piece. Jennieclare
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This generation is YOURS - I really like this reflective poem - do the young give the old a second glance I wonder these days. Generations tend to live apart in our culture which is such a shame when they could learn so much of interesting past history. It's the current generations duty to tend for the next generations world. Very thought provoking piece. Jennieclare
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You're welcome. Jennie
Comment from jmyron
We each have our travels through the vistas of life, and, if our paths should perchance meet, well, perhaps we may travel together for a time...
John
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We each have our travels through the vistas of life, and, if our paths should perchance meet, well, perhaps we may travel together for a time...
John
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thanks john
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi deepwater,
Nice to see a poem from your pen. I enjoyed every line of this poem that is written in a creative form. You have good word choices and the flow is even. I think your last line is especially powerful with 'the gneration is you're the past'..excellent line. Well done...chey
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2011
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Hi deepwater,
Nice to see a poem from your pen. I enjoyed every line of this poem that is written in a creative form. You have good word choices and the flow is even. I think your last line is especially powerful with 'the gneration is you're the past'..excellent line. Well done...chey
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thank you chey for reading
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of poetry that raises some basic issues about the essence of our existence, especially towards the end of life. It provokes thought. kudos
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This is a nice piece of poetry that raises some basic issues about the essence of our existence, especially towards the end of life. It provokes thought. kudos
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thank you
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
"This generation is yours" I believe you meant- last line. Very well written with a powerful message of what lies ahead for those we leave behind. Thanks so much for sharing this. Betty
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"This generation is yours" I believe you meant- last line. Very well written with a powerful message of what lies ahead for those we leave behind. Thanks so much for sharing this. Betty
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thank you
Comment from The Stranger
we try to learn from the mistakes of the past, in order to design a brighter future, but we increasingly seem to fail to heed the pitfalls of the past and continue to fall headlong first back into them
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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we try to learn from the mistakes of the past, in order to design a brighter future, but we increasingly seem to fail to heed the pitfalls of the past and continue to fall headlong first back into them
Comment Written 10-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2011
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thanks for the review
