5/7/5 (Leaves in Fright)
Leaves float back to tree, so frightened.121 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of every syllable in this clever 5-7-5. Personification is the perfect figure of speech for conveying the theme.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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You have made excellent use of every syllable in this clever 5-7-5. Personification is the perfect figure of speech for conveying the theme.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much.
Comment from gudbjorg
Rather spooky I poem feel, yes its the but that's just the aim of the poem, to get people only interested in themselves and little of others. Yes the Halloween, dead levees fall unto the ground. Well, the poem itself if really nice and well done.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Rather spooky I poem feel, yes its the but that's just the aim of the poem, to get people only interested in themselves and little of others. Yes the Halloween, dead levees fall unto the ground. Well, the poem itself if really nice and well done.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Now THIS is a clever one! These tiny things almost always leave my yawwwwning with boredom. You just got my vote. In fact, I didn't even write this review till I'd made sure I voted.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Now THIS is a clever one! These tiny things almost always leave my yawwwwning with boredom. You just got my vote. In fact, I didn't even write this review till I'd made sure I voted.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you SOOOOO much.
Comment from amahra
This is a beautiful art work you chose for this writing. I liked the short writing with its very large meaning. Great job my dear.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is a beautiful art work you chose for this writing. I liked the short writing with its very large meaning. Great job my dear.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you much.
Comment from Ackanem
I've never thought of leaves jumping back onto the tree. This is an original and very well expressed. Since I have been raking leaves all morning this was especially fun for me to read. Great poem and I love the picture you chose. Blessings sent your way for the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I've never thought of leaves jumping back onto the tree. This is an original and very well expressed. Since I have been raking leaves all morning this was especially fun for me to read. Great poem and I love the picture you chose. Blessings sent your way for the contest!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much and keep on raking.
Comment from Jackarrie
'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright
This is a good Halloween 5-7-5 poem,, all syllables are correct.
Well done and good luck in the contest Mary
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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'twas Halloween eve
dead leaves jumped back onto trees
so raw was their fright
This is a good Halloween 5-7-5 poem,, all syllables are correct.
Well done and good luck in the contest Mary
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a good 5-7-5 and a perfect poem to read here today. It started snowing a couple of hours ago, and I bet the leaves wish they were still on the tree. Good word selection paints a picture in the reader's mind. Good luck in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This is a good 5-7-5 and a perfect poem to read here today. It started snowing a couple of hours ago, and I bet the leaves wish they were still on the tree. Good word selection paints a picture in the reader's mind. Good luck in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Wow, this will be a terrible sight to behold. I'm sure it's a component of dreams or more appropriately, nightmares. Very good Halloween poem. cheers
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Wow, this will be a terrible sight to behold. I'm sure it's a component of dreams or more appropriately, nightmares. Very good Halloween poem. cheers
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from Martin Chan
This poem 5-7-5(Leaves in Fright) is a nicely composed poem for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest entry. It is a poem about the Halloween time and it is presented nicely but it is only a poet's imagination that would never happens in real life.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This poem 5-7-5(Leaves in Fright) is a nicely composed poem for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest entry. It is a poem about the Halloween time and it is presented nicely but it is only a poet's imagination that would never happens in real life.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
Comment from brentman99
I like your poem and think that the picture is quite interesting. Kind of like playing a film in reverse. I was all set to give five stars, then I re-read it again and looked at the picture and decided that it deserved more. A very interesting concept that adds new dimensions to the meaning of frightened.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I like your poem and think that the picture is quite interesting. Kind of like playing a film in reverse. I was all set to give five stars, then I re-read it again and looked at the picture and decided that it deserved more. A very interesting concept that adds new dimensions to the meaning of frightened.
Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much.