Writings From the Heart
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Comment from Ekim777
Our poet is a romantic soul and indeed the moon is the playground of all our souls, though a darkened moon is surely invisible. So our poet broaches the unanswerable question. He enjoys using rhymes with a slip in the first and final couplets. Still it is a stirring piece. -Ekim777
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Our poet is a romantic soul and indeed the moon is the playground of all our souls, though a darkened moon is surely invisible. So our poet broaches the unanswerable question. He enjoys using rhymes with a slip in the first and final couplets. Still it is a stirring piece. -Ekim777
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thank you 777
Comment from Eric1
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem covering the last moments of a soldier on this earth, the sound of the last post, the six comrades carrying him to his grave, it reads beautifully has good rhyme and great rhythm.
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This is a hauntingly beautiful poem covering the last moments of a soldier on this earth, the sound of the last post, the six comrades carrying him to his grave, it reads beautifully has good rhyme and great rhythm.
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Comment from Lacy Mariah
Great, great, great poem! Very beautiful and descriptive. My favorite line was "glimmering stars reflect tears on your face." Haha, I kinda wish I had written it! Beautiful poem:)
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Great, great, great poem! Very beautiful and descriptive. My favorite line was "glimmering stars reflect tears on your face." Haha, I kinda wish I had written it! Beautiful poem:)
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thank you Lacy
Comment from Delahay
Taps has always seemed to be such a plaintive tune. It really gets to me whenever I hear it. You have done so well to describe the idea of a military funeral.
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Taps has always seemed to be such a plaintive tune. It really gets to me whenever I hear it. You have done so well to describe the idea of a military funeral.
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You have penned a very moving poem in tribute to soldiers everywhere. So many soldiers have died, cruelly gunned down or blown up, and many on beaches. We must remember them, Giddy
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You have penned a very moving poem in tribute to soldiers everywhere. So many soldiers have died, cruelly gunned down or blown up, and many on beaches. We must remember them, Giddy
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thank you Giddy
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful account on dying soldiers at war! the imagery is exquisite! and you can sense the sorrow of your words.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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this is a beautiful account on dying soldiers at war! the imagery is exquisite! and you can sense the sorrow of your words.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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thank you again
Comment from dennis0530
This is writing about the thoughts of a dying soldier.
As the accompanying illustration depicts, these fallen heroes are remembered and will be for a long time. The wordings might as well be part of the poem and the photo very symbolic.
From breathing his last to his final deploy - the final assignment to a place of rest.
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This is writing about the thoughts of a dying soldier.
As the accompanying illustration depicts, these fallen heroes are remembered and will be for a long time. The wordings might as well be part of the poem and the photo very symbolic.
From breathing his last to his final deploy - the final assignment to a place of rest.
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Comment from Sueswrite
O.M.G! I'm actually speechless. " Emotional Depth". I read this once, then twice and the third time, slowly. Seriously, I had to return to where I'm sitting. Amazing, nothing to critique, except for the fact I'm babysitting and I shouldn't have left the kids. (Kidding). Just, wow! Best wishes 6 stars!
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O.M.G! I'm actually speechless. " Emotional Depth". I read this once, then twice and the third time, slowly. Seriously, I had to return to where I'm sitting. Amazing, nothing to critique, except for the fact I'm babysitting and I shouldn't have left the kids. (Kidding). Just, wow! Best wishes 6 stars!
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Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem with a great picture. Good word flow and rhyming tell the story of this soldier being carried to his final resting place. Good poem but so very sad.
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Great poem with a great picture. Good word flow and rhyming tell the story of this soldier being carried to his final resting place. Good poem but so very sad.
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Comment from dthomas6985
I really appreciate this read.I enjoyed the essence of your words. I felt the feeling before your words also. Very nice read. Blessings n Success n smiles.
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I really appreciate this read.I enjoyed the essence of your words. I felt the feeling before your words also. Very nice read. Blessings n Success n smiles.
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thank you
