Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "But best is the ice-cream "A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from DR DIP
Nice recollection GW,enjoyed it.Interesting AAAAAAA rhyme
I really enjoyed reading this as I feel everyone could relate to it. I think we all have experienced this same times growing up at the beach. Everyone enjoys recollection and reminiscing..Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Nice recollection GW,enjoyed it.Interesting AAAAAAA rhyme
I really enjoyed reading this as I feel everyone could relate to it. I think we all have experienced this same times growing up at the beach. Everyone enjoys recollection and reminiscing..Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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thank you Dip
Comment from artisart4u
This is a nice poem "Summer Fun," seen through the eyes of a child.
Your covered what it like on a summer day at the beach with your family.
Good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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This is a nice poem "Summer Fun," seen through the eyes of a child.
Your covered what it like on a summer day at the beach with your family.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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again thank you for this
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'But best is the ice-cream' is an extremely well-written piece, with more than a touch of nostalgia. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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'But best is the ice-cream' is an extremely well-written piece, with more than a touch of nostalgia. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you Duchess
deepwater, you're very welcome.
the Duchess
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely poem... brings back so many childhood memories of the beach. We were alway sooooo sleepy afterward, too. You really captured the feel of those wonderful days. :)
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Lovely poem... brings back so many childhood memories of the beach. We were alway sooooo sleepy afterward, too. You really captured the feel of those wonderful days. :)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you phillis
Comment from Artist Dilemma
This nostalgic couplet is so memorable and well written I had to give it the top notch ratings, which is well-deserved. The poem not only is full of wonderful childhood memories but it also excels in beautiful phrases.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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This nostalgic couplet is so memorable and well written I had to give it the top notch ratings, which is well-deserved. The poem not only is full of wonderful childhood memories but it also excels in beautiful phrases.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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again thank you for this
Comment from bard owl
You have listed so many of things that children love. You have described the perfect day in the minds of some youngsters. Ice cream is always such a special treat when the weather is hot and little swimmers are beginning to get very tired. Excellent imagery in this fun write. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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You have listed so many of things that children love. You have described the perfect day in the minds of some youngsters. Ice cream is always such a special treat when the weather is hot and little swimmers are beginning to get very tired. Excellent imagery in this fun write. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda
Comment from Bina1
It is fun to look back and remember, thanks for sharing. A lovely memory path you took me down with your lovely poem. Wonderful!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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It is fun to look back and remember, thanks for sharing. A lovely memory path you took me down with your lovely poem. Wonderful!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you for this review Gary
Comment from Kaila Mari
Your artwork enhances this poem with the imagery of a family's day at the beach. You have captured the musings of a child's mind. The poem is well structured and is an easy read with its mono-rhyme. It reads well and I enjoyed how you set the picture of a family outing at the beach, and completed the imagery with words. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Your artwork enhances this poem with the imagery of a family's day at the beach. You have captured the musings of a child's mind. The poem is well structured and is an easy read with its mono-rhyme. It reads well and I enjoyed how you set the picture of a family outing at the beach, and completed the imagery with words. Great job!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you
Comment from livelylinda
deepwater: your words are magical. Such a gentle soaring through a child's mind about his special childhood summers. Of course, it brings back memories for me, as well. Very nice write and worthy of those six stars. Linda
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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deepwater: your words are magical. Such a gentle soaring through a child's mind about his special childhood summers. Of course, it brings back memories for me, as well. Very nice write and worthy of those six stars. Linda
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you Linda
Comment from OLA THOMAS
You've really got the muse of a child. If you take a peak at the heart of a child, what you'd see will be thoughts of fun for the moment. No troubled thoughts. Good work, well mused.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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You've really got the muse of a child. If you take a peak at the heart of a child, what you'd see will be thoughts of fun for the moment. No troubled thoughts. Good work, well mused.
ola thomas
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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thank you Ola for this
