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A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics

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Comment from Wabigoon
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Brett--

Hi, I enjoy these. I would not see them as country lyrics. I...tend to think you're being hard on yourself, but then maybe that's my angle or excuse.

Angels need guys like you and me and so many others to make them feel like angels! I have yet to see a country song about that!

I have one problem with the poem as you have it:

"She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings."

Why two sentences here instead of one with a comma?

Good job. Take it easy on the Jack Daniels.
Wabigoon

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from Brabazon
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This is about the guilt of abusing the love of a good wife. Somebody once said that patient people can be as patient as they can be, but once they revolt it is irreversible.

The poem read without a bump and the rhythm was as pronounced as a kick drum. The rhymes came steadily and did a good job decorating the tails of the lines.

Thanks, for sharing.

Brabazon.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from patsolstad
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I was trying to imagine the tune as I read through this. I think it will be a terrific song, with that repeated stanza. I've never done one of these, but it looks like it would be fun to try. Excellent work!

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from valerieellis
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Another exceptional writing! It amazes me how I always sing your words when I read them :-) This was a beautiful tribute and as always, flowed easily and smoothly. Thank you for sharing. God bless :)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from bob cullen
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This my friend is pure country. Sadly though for you, George Jones is no longer with us. These are lyrics he has lived.

I hope you can find a publisher for this, it really is that good. Have you had any of your songs recorded or published? This one sure deserves to find success


 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from skye
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Excellent. This is easy to read, easy to sing, and hard to realize it is a reality for so many.
Excellent repeating lines. These are my favorite.

The only peace I find here in the valley is when she gives herself to me.
There may be no such thing as angels but I got one here with me.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from Phoenix8
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I love this, it is truly beautifully written. It is unusual to read about the struggle of alcoholism so well thought out. I love how the poem not only portrays his struggle but the patience and compassion in the wife. This was lovely. ð???

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from harmony13
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Excellent Lyrics! I really enjoyed the author's words. They were heart felt, strong, creative and thought provoking. The artwork is perfected and reflects the words of this song.
The words also reflect the theme of alcoholism.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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nothing less than a six
this is by far the best lyrics and I want to hear them sung.
I had a friend here on fanstory that I put music to her words because they were wonderful and I sent them to her.
yours are ready to be finished...please do

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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Comment from emkoutny
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this is the second one of your songs that I have read and I enjoyed this one as well. It is like a "Stand by Your Man" from the man's point of view. I hope you have put it to music. It is as good as anything I hear on the radio.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2015


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