Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Your turn with the Soap"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is written with wisdom, heartfelt emotion and sincerity. It delivers a powerful message, by asking the questions that churn around in our minds most of the time. Well done!
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It is written with wisdom, heartfelt emotion and sincerity. It delivers a powerful message, by asking the questions that churn around in our minds most of the time. Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you janine for reading
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Your turn with the Soap' is an well-written and extremely thought-provoking piece of writing. This talented poet has me dredging my conscience with his rhetorical questions. Only time and the way I felt could produce a true answer. It was a pleasure to both read and review this unusual and 'take-me-back-in-time' work.
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'Your turn with the Soap' is an well-written and extremely thought-provoking piece of writing. This talented poet has me dredging my conscience with his rhetorical questions. Only time and the way I felt could produce a true answer. It was a pleasure to both read and review this unusual and 'take-me-back-in-time' work.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you so much for your review duchess and for reading my work gary
Comment from Nicki_Mist
This is so thought provoking snd so totally in contrast to your last love poem I read. I will say that yes we are all God's children. But, in the end it's a matter of if we have un- adpoted ourselves from HIM. Is there such a word as un-adopted? lol. Just trying to get my point across. Don't wash my mouth out with soap please? Great imagery and good poem.
Nicole
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This is so thought provoking snd so totally in contrast to your last love poem I read. I will say that yes we are all God's children. But, in the end it's a matter of if we have un- adpoted ourselves from HIM. Is there such a word as un-adopted? lol. Just trying to get my point across. Don't wash my mouth out with soap please? Great imagery and good poem.
Nicole
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you nicki ..hmmm un-adoped well your a writer so i guess you can use it, thanks my friend
Comment from jwlee211
Excellent message. Even as adults we fail to speak the most important messages to us. Great work and wonderful word choice adding to the poem.
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Excellent message. Even as adults we fail to speak the most important messages to us. Great work and wonderful word choice adding to the poem.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you jwlee for reading
Comment from rudywalsh
Well done, very poetic with a fine message attached, with a lovely image to sett the whole thing a light, good luck Rudy.
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Well done, very poetic with a fine message attached, with a lovely image to sett the whole thing a light, good luck Rudy.
Comment Written 08-May-2010
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thank you Rudy my friend for reading
Comment from Ann Smith
I like your comparison of children's lies compared to adults and when they lie. Maybe we need to wash some adults mouths out with soap. It couldn't hurt. I think if we knew how much we were lied to in a single day we couldn't believe it. Even unspoken words that should be spoken are lies. The poem does what a good poem should do and that is make you think. ann
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I like your comparison of children's lies compared to adults and when they lie. Maybe we need to wash some adults mouths out with soap. It couldn't hurt. I think if we knew how much we were lied to in a single day we couldn't believe it. Even unspoken words that should be spoken are lies. The poem does what a good poem should do and that is make you think. ann
Comment Written 07-May-2010
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thank you ann
Comment from IanC
A very well written poem with many ideas to make one think. When read out loud it has a nice cadence and sounds lyrical. Well done, Ian
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A very well written poem with many ideas to make one think. When read out loud it has a nice cadence and sounds lyrical. Well done, Ian
Comment Written 07-May-2010
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thank you Ian for reading
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
I hear what you're saying! To complain, to be negative..yet truthful- or to give em what they want to hear, and be a 'positive' person- causing no ripples.Loved this writing- a lot of deep truthful meaning. Betty
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I hear what you're saying! To complain, to be negative..yet truthful- or to give em what they want to hear, and be a 'positive' person- causing no ripples.Loved this writing- a lot of deep truthful meaning. Betty
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thank you Betty for reading
Comment from Aletheia
This is very profound. Why live a lie? The truth shall set you free, so speak it! That's what He wanted us to do, afterall. Another good write! B
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This is very profound. Why live a lie? The truth shall set you free, so speak it! That's what He wanted us to do, afterall. Another good write! B
Comment Written 07-May-2010
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thanks alot B my friend for reading
Comment from fictionwriter
I would love to have someone to share my feeling with, and who would listen and comfort me, but that is not the person in my life. I'm not sure very many of those exist, so not telling them anything may be a lie, but it saves the fight. Great job.
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I would love to have someone to share my feeling with, and who would listen and comfort me, but that is not the person in my life. I'm not sure very many of those exist, so not telling them anything may be a lie, but it saves the fight. Great job.
Comment Written 07-May-2010
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thank you fictionwriter for reading
