Writings From the Heart
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Comment from jmshumate
This is an interesting poem, I think it is talking about recognizing and building upon the foundation of generations before. Good poem.
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This is an interesting poem, I think it is talking about recognizing and building upon the foundation of generations before. Good poem.
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thank you
Comment from Fireshadow
GW, today is tomorrow's past, and all humanity does or doesn't do now will forever impact our world tomorrow. Your poem sets the stage for deep pondering on this issue, perhaps you should re-classify it under the philosophical category. Excellent write, my friend.
Ama
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GW, today is tomorrow's past, and all humanity does or doesn't do now will forever impact our world tomorrow. Your poem sets the stage for deep pondering on this issue, perhaps you should re-classify it under the philosophical category. Excellent write, my friend.
Ama
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Comment from ameen786
A very powerful composition with a big challenge to the new generation; not sure whether they are up to it; most of them are aimless-the me generation, God help us. A very timely writing, thanks for sharing and God bless.
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A very powerful composition with a big challenge to the new generation; not sure whether they are up to it; most of them are aimless-the me generation, God help us. A very timely writing, thanks for sharing and God bless.
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welcome and thank you
Comment from tango494
I love this poem, the creativeness, and overall message. I think your words are quite interesting and unique. The only complaint is the font in blue, I am a bit color blind and I had some trouble reading. Thanks for sharing this well written poem.
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I love this poem, the creativeness, and overall message. I think your words are quite interesting and unique. The only complaint is the font in blue, I am a bit color blind and I had some trouble reading. Thanks for sharing this well written poem.
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Comment from Alexander E Poet
I thought this was insightful food for thought and thought provoking , wonderful piece of poetry I enjoyed the imagery an emotions that were present, and this particular piece of poetry well done. No errors of mistakes Alexander
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I thought this was insightful food for thought and thought provoking , wonderful piece of poetry I enjoyed the imagery an emotions that were present, and this particular piece of poetry well done. No errors of mistakes Alexander
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thanks QQ is good to be back gary
Comment from j-sand
well written. this question asked has many answers. "... the distress of evolution on man?" i believe you have touched a tender subject. well done!
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well written. this question asked has many answers. "... the distress of evolution on man?" i believe you have touched a tender subject. well done!
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Comment from RobertaLee
Interesting thoughts. I think you have a couple of word choice problems you might want to address.
Do you mean, "...our souls have engaged..."?
Also, "...explore the foreign bu ne roads..."
And, ...generation is yours, the past..."
Blessings,
Roberta
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Interesting thoughts. I think you have a couple of word choice problems you might want to address.
Do you mean, "...our souls have engaged..."?
Also, "...explore the foreign bu ne roads..."
And, ...generation is yours, the past..."
Blessings,
Roberta
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thanks
Comment from Veekz
Really great piece of writing that leaves your readers with something to ponder on :)
My fave line is:
What is to come with this passing of years, the distress of evolution on man?
A scary question to ask oneself for sure!
One little spelling error below -
desirers is spelled desires
Thanks for the fab little read :)
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Really great piece of writing that leaves your readers with something to ponder on :)
My fave line is:
What is to come with this passing of years, the distress of evolution on man?
A scary question to ask oneself for sure!
One little spelling error below -
desirers is spelled desires
Thanks for the fab little read :)
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Comment from percival86jack
Oh to be around fifty years from now to witness the results of this generation's actions or inaction. To view a world unknown to us... will it be a better world or one on the eve of destruction? Cheers, Jack
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Oh to be around fifty years from now to witness the results of this generation's actions or inaction. To view a world unknown to us... will it be a better world or one on the eve of destruction? Cheers, Jack
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Comment from c_lucas
There is no future without a past. It is how we handle the past that gives us a future. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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There is no future without a past. It is how we handle the past that gives us a future. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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You're welcome.
