Comment from Teri7

Excellent

o.k. to be honest this is not my type of poem but you did a great job on it. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery with all the things you can do on it. Great job. Teri

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you, Teri.
Stories about someone else's grand kids who aren't related to me or my family in any way really isn't my favorite kind of story, either.
Still, I read and review them without saying so, out of courtesy to those who are my friends..
I pretty much know before getting started, and by the author I'm about to review, what type of story I am in for.
Thank you for your review.
~Dean

reply by Teri7 on 04-Jun-2016

Thank you Dean and I truly appreciate it very much. I do love your work. You are a great author and just all around good person. hugs, Teri

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

So are you, Teri.
Thanks again.
~Dean

reply by Teri7 on 05-Jun-2016

you are so welcome. Have a blessed day! Teri

reply by Anonymous Member on 07-Jun-2016

Thank you Dean and I truly appreciate it very much. I do love your work. You are a great author and just all around good person. hugs, Teri

reply by Anonymous Member on 08-Jun-2016

you are so welcome. Have a blessed day! Teri

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

What is the font you used? Man, who could believe a word like aghast could turn into green slime and crickets. As usual, the poem is off the mainstream, but ghoulish in content. Still, U miss your prose.

Great poem.

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 Comment Written 04-Jun-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2016

The font is called "Black Adder" , Ingrid.
I wrote a 150 horror story recently.
Only something like 22 people read and reviewed it which is why I gave up writing prose (for the most part), and concentrate on poetry. No one wants to read your prose.
Take care, and thanks for the R&R.
~Dean