Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winds of Change"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from BeautifulLie
This is.. wow. It's so good! You have so many parts in there that I just LOVE, I can't pick a single piece. I like your style and your word choice. The way you express yourself is awesome. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2010
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This is.. wow. It's so good! You have so many parts in there that I just LOVE, I can't pick a single piece. I like your style and your word choice. The way you express yourself is awesome. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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your most welcome
Comment from R.Selvey
This poem is fine-yet grand-it stands alone.So intense the feeling of the Arthur,I could almost feel and hear a ripple of the water.More confidence,the approach,dreams do come true.
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This poem is fine-yet grand-it stands alone.So intense the feeling of the Arthur,I could almost feel and hear a ripple of the water.More confidence,the approach,dreams do come true.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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thanks
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is so beautifully written. So full of deep emotion, of love and sadness...I like the way the feelings and apprehensions are presented very effectively in question form. Well done.
Anabella
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This is so beautifully written. So full of deep emotion, of love and sadness...I like the way the feelings and apprehensions are presented very effectively in question form. Well done.
Anabella
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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thank you anabella
Comment from Donaya Haymond
I particularly like the illustration you chose for your poem. It, along with the words of the poem, reminds me of a time I waded through the beach alone and sang the song that reminded me of my love on another continent.
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I particularly like the illustration you chose for your poem. It, along with the words of the poem, reminds me of a time I waded through the beach alone and sang the song that reminded me of my love on another continent.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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thank you for your review and comments
Comment from Nicki_Mist
This deserves a six star rating in my opinion. So beautifully written that it brought tears to my eyes and emotions to my heart. This was filled with imagery and love. Keep on writing like this.
Hugs, Nicole
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This deserves a six star rating in my opinion. So beautifully written that it brought tears to my eyes and emotions to my heart. This was filled with imagery and love. Keep on writing like this.
Hugs, Nicole
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2010
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thank you Nicle for this welcome review and comments Gary
Comment from E.P. Thomas
A well-written free verse poem that expresses multiple deep emotions. Nice imagery and emotive language. A very lonely and despairing voice.
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A well-written free verse poem that expresses multiple deep emotions. Nice imagery and emotive language. A very lonely and despairing voice.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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thank you EP for your review
Comment from marcellawachtel
Nice poem, questioning and exploring feelings, to a loved one who may or may not be there. the poet's insecurity, and fears of losing his beloved is a theme that works through the entire poem.
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Nice poem, questioning and exploring feelings, to a loved one who may or may not be there. the poet's insecurity, and fears of losing his beloved is a theme that works through the entire poem.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2010
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thank you for this review and your comments
Comment from gabriowl
That tightrope walk of trust and commitment - a quest that spans the life of many a human being! This poem speaks in my mind very 'poetically' - that is to say, the words have an enchanting repetitive quality that really hammers home the feelings you present in this poem. My favorite line has to be:
"Can we stand hand in hand at peace with the understanding of time in this moonlight?"
The Present Unwrapped. Beautiful!
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That tightrope walk of trust and commitment - a quest that spans the life of many a human being! This poem speaks in my mind very 'poetically' - that is to say, the words have an enchanting repetitive quality that really hammers home the feelings you present in this poem. My favorite line has to be:
"Can we stand hand in hand at peace with the understanding of time in this moonlight?"
The Present Unwrapped. Beautiful!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2010
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thank you for your comments and this review
Comment from adfsfsd
I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, showing that the writer may be holding themselves back from their love, afraid that if they get in to deep they will be hurt, afraid to give, afraid to live.
Top notch poem! ;)
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I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, showing that the writer may be holding themselves back from their love, afraid that if they get in to deep they will be hurt, afraid to give, afraid to live.
Top notch poem! ;)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2010
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thank you chloep
Comment from animatqua
Nice flow in this poem. The metaphors with the wind and the water really make the poem work. They bring out the sense of wandering within a spirit as well as the feeling of insecurity in love.
Nice job!
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Nice flow in this poem. The metaphors with the wind and the water really make the poem work. They bring out the sense of wandering within a spirit as well as the feeling of insecurity in love.
Nice job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2010
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thank you for this review
