Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Dear old Gram,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Ponder
Hi Deepwater,
I thought this was a lovely tribute to your grandmother. The occupation of the Channel Islands was particularly brutal and she must have suffered during that time.
I thought this was a nicely put together poem, easy to read and enjoyable. In your final line 'gram' should be 'Gram'
Jules
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Hi Deepwater,
I thought this was a lovely tribute to your grandmother. The occupation of the Channel Islands was particularly brutal and she must have suffered during that time.
I thought this was a nicely put together poem, easy to read and enjoyable. In your final line 'gram' should be 'Gram'
Jules
Comment Written 19-May-2010
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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thank you for reading Jules and for the comment
Comment from Janine Ellis-Fynn
This is a beautiful, well expressed and emotive tribute to your dearest gram. I love your descriptions of the war years she endured. Well done and thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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This is a beautiful, well expressed and emotive tribute to your dearest gram. I love your descriptions of the war years she endured. Well done and thanks for posting.
Comment Written 19-May-2010
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thank you for reading Janine
Comment from Joan E.
You have captured the spirit of your "gram" and a bit of her life's experience in this tribute. I enjoyed your free verse and was pleased you illustrated your words with her picture as a young girl.
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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You have captured the spirit of your "gram" and a bit of her life's experience in this tribute. I enjoyed your free verse and was pleased you illustrated your words with her picture as a young girl.
Comment Written 19-May-2010
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thank you Joan
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
Beautiful ode to your Grandmother! Written with great rhythm and flow- and presented just perfectly. Thanks so very much for sharing another great piece. Betty
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Beautiful ode to your Grandmother! Written with great rhythm and flow- and presented just perfectly. Thanks so very much for sharing another great piece. Betty
Comment Written 19-May-2010
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thank you again for reading Betty
Comment from rudywalsh
Well done, what a nice little poem about your gram, it must have been tough living during the war.
Nice one, have a great day. Rudy.
reply by the author on 19-May-2010
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Well done, what a nice little poem about your gram, it must have been tough living during the war.
Nice one, have a great day. Rudy.
Comment Written 19-May-2010
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thank you for reading Rudy
Comment from Kingsland
this is a well written poetic verse in tribute to someone you care about quite a lot. This poem has good imagery scattered though it thoughts and phrases. It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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this is a well written poetic verse in tribute to someone you care about quite a lot. This poem has good imagery scattered though it thoughts and phrases. It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you John for reading this
Comment from fictionwriter
Those people endured a lot. And they were strong minded and willed. Seems many are looked up to and reviered that survived. Great job.
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Those people endured a lot. And they were strong minded and willed. Seems many are looked up to and reviered that survived. Great job.
Comment Written 18-May-2010
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thank you fictionwriter for reading
Comment from Dom G Robles
deepwater, I like your poem. You spoke of Old Gram who had been a veteran of war. He had been a prisoner who had learned and fought the tyrannies of men--defending the meek and supporting the weak--"We laid you this day with tears all did say I miss you Dear old Gram."
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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deepwater, I like your poem. You spoke of Old Gram who had been a veteran of war. He had been a prisoner who had learned and fought the tyrannies of men--defending the meek and supporting the weak--"We laid you this day with tears all did say I miss you Dear old Gram."
Comment Written 18-May-2010
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thank you for reading Dom
Comment from Marathonwriter
Hi deepwater,
I always enjoy stories of pioneers and the strength of character it took to endure their many trials. I think you did a great job telling your grandmother's story in this short poem.
:0)Chris
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Hi deepwater,
I always enjoy stories of pioneers and the strength of character it took to endure their many trials. I think you did a great job telling your grandmother's story in this short poem.
:0)Chris
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you Marathon
Comment from thequillman
Deepwater, I really enjoyed this poem. I could sense the very character of gram. I wasn't certain if in the third line from the bottom,[cleaned] should have been [cleansed]?
Well written.
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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Deepwater, I really enjoyed this poem. I could sense the very character of gram. I wasn't certain if in the third line from the bottom,[cleaned] should have been [cleansed]?
Well written.
Comment Written 18-May-2010
reply by the author on 18-May-2010
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thank you thequillman for reading and the comment
