Comment from TELLER OF TALES

Excellent

The authors notes, very well explain this beautiful and thoughtful work about life, his feelings are very powerful towards life and our mother earth, this is a lovely message to all mankind, the authors concern in his work is very well explained in his work and in his notes, EXCELLENT....FROM THE TELLER OF TALES......

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Thanks for your deep analysis and excellent review

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
This is a perfectly written haiku verse. Welcome to FS!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Happy to see that you call it perfect.thanks for your generous views

Comment from steevie

Excellent

Yes life as a kid would be much different now if we were to go back and experience it all over again, but mind you, that was part of being a kid in the first place, knowing so little and yet having a great time.

well done
steve

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013

Thanks for sharing your view and kind rating:-)

reply by steevie on 23-Jun-2013

you're very welcome

steve

Comment from barleygirl

Good

Good job! I like that the entire piece is one sentence, one flowing thought, & not pieces of thoughts broken up by lines or syllables. I like the imagery, too.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thanks for your positive views:-)

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon

Interesting poem that meets all strictures. Imagining the unborn fetus (shining sweet full moon) and what the baby will look like when birthed (once out of the cocoon).

Well done. Evocative imagery sets the mind ablaze with anticipation.

Regards:

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thanks for insight analysis of my work.i appreciate your words.thank you:-)

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I'm right there with you on this. I realize how sheltered I was as a child and why my parents did it. It would be fun to go back to the days when the world looked all bright and shiny. Nice job pulling the emotion out of your words.+

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Its nice to know you feel the same way.it indeed is missed by all of us.thanks for your positive feedback

Comment from Nuad1

Exceptional

Really, REALLY liked this work. You have expressed beautifully what the majority of us wish for: to get back to a time of possibilities!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

I deeply acknowledge your excellent rating and review.i am happy that it could touch your heart.thanks for a great feedback:-)

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

When we look back and remember the fun and freedom... They were the best of times, loved my youth! I enjoyed your creative little 5-7-5 Anupam, good look in the contest :)

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Glad to know that you like it.thanks for your generous review:-)

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

Anupam,

Once we are out of the cocoon, we can never go back to that place where we don't know the things we know and have experienced. The idea to be able to go back there to that innocent place can be desirable.

Excellent 5/7/5 poem.

Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

I appreciate your such deep analysis of theme.hearty thanks for your positive review:-)

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon

Great 5-7-5 poem. I'm pleased you had a good childhood. You express yourself very well.
Well done.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013

Thanks for your positive and kind words:-)