Betrayal
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Betrayal Chapter 8"In the title.
41 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It's a good thing not to trust some people sometimes. They only bring heartache. This fellow sounds like that kind of person....until the next chapter...staying tune.....
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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It's a good thing not to trust some people sometimes. They only bring heartache. This fellow sounds like that kind of person....until the next chapter...staying tune.....
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you again, Rosemary. Tania's meeting with Colin takes place next. Will Tania get her proof, though. Thanks so much for your support, my friend, I really appreciate it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Tania was right about Colin getting in touch again and she seems to be handling the get together well enough. It will certainly be interesting to see what he has to say and how he will try to finagle information from her. Look forward to the next chapter.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Tania was right about Colin getting in touch again and she seems to be handling the get together well enough. It will certainly be interesting to see what he has to say and how he will try to finagle information from her. Look forward to the next chapter.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Ralf, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. The meeting comes next, but will it go the way Tania wants it too? Stay tuned, my friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Chrissy710
A good read Sandra.
Your story is coming along nicely and is engaging to the reader . awaiting Chapter 9 dont keep us waiting too long Ha aha. Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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A good read Sandra.
Your story is coming along nicely and is engaging to the reader . awaiting Chapter 9 dont keep us waiting too long Ha aha. Cheers Chris
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Chris. I so pleased you enjoyed this part. Part 9 will be the start of something...? Warm hugs, my friend, stay safe and well. :)) Sandra xx
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Will do it is lovely here at the moment warm Spring days
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Action opens up with Tania anxious about answering the phone.
Seems by the tone of her voice, Tania definitely does not want anything to do with Colin. Then, she agrees to meet him with her recorder in tow.
In P8, should old times' sake be old time's sake?
First a drink, then lunch, then what follows? That becomes the question.
Ending lends to possible disaster occurring.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Action opens up with Tania anxious about answering the phone.
Seems by the tone of her voice, Tania definitely does not want anything to do with Colin. Then, she agrees to meet him with her recorder in tow.
In P8, should old times' sake be old time's sake?
First a drink, then lunch, then what follows? That becomes the question.
Ending lends to possible disaster occurring.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Brett, for reading this part. No, Tania doesn't want anything to do with Colin, but he has stolen things from her and now she has to prove it. The drink, then a meal, what happens next is not going to be nice. Far from it.
The, Old times' sake, I checked on that before I posted. I am right because it's plural. Google it and you'll see. I only checked because it came up once before, so this time I wanted to make sure I had it right. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
Ah, you do love to keep us in suspense, don't you? I can't wait to see what happens at that meeting? Will Colin trip himself up and admit he knows Grant? Or is it Colin at all? He certainly seems guilty, but then he'd make the perfect patsy, wouldn't he?
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Ah, you do love to keep us in suspense, don't you? I can't wait to see what happens at that meeting? Will Colin trip himself up and admit he knows Grant? Or is it Colin at all? He certainly seems guilty, but then he'd make the perfect patsy, wouldn't he?
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Next part is the meeting, and then.... LOL! All I'll say is, things will be changing. Thank you so much for another lovely review, my friend. I do so appreciate your support. Have a wonderful day! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I don't trust him either!! But I hope he wouldn't try to kill her, maybe just kidnap the ransom her plans. =] Great as always. I didn't see any errors and am looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I don't trust him either!! But I hope he wouldn't try to kill her, maybe just kidnap the ransom her plans. =] Great as always. I didn't see any errors and am looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Hi Rox, thank you so much for another lovely review. I'm so glad you are enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from estory
I thought the dialogue was realistic, and we get a picture through it of these two, Colin and Tania, as they dance around in this courtship teasing and manipulating and holding each other at arms' length. There is deffinitely an undercurrent here, some motives behind each of them, that remain mysterious and under the radar. I think the suspense is there. How will that meeting at the bar turn out? estory
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I thought the dialogue was realistic, and we get a picture through it of these two, Colin and Tania, as they dance around in this courtship teasing and manipulating and holding each other at arms' length. There is deffinitely an undercurrent here, some motives behind each of them, that remain mysterious and under the radar. I think the suspense is there. How will that meeting at the bar turn out? estory
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Estory, I really appreciate you reading my story and giving me your thoughts on it. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from robyn corum
Sandra,
Very good chapter - though, like Monica, I'm more than a little worried about our MC. I know she's a smart one and on guard, but that guy has proven he will stoop to just about anything to get ahead. I don't know what killing her might do - except help in this ONE project. Hmmm...
One thought:
1.) Tania chewed on her lip as a look of distaste face covered her face.
--> delete 'face' after 'distaste'
Thanks a bunch!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Sandra,
Very good chapter - though, like Monica, I'm more than a little worried about our MC. I know she's a smart one and on guard, but that guy has proven he will stoop to just about anything to get ahead. I don't know what killing her might do - except help in this ONE project. Hmmm...
One thought:
1.) Tania chewed on her lip as a look of distaste face covered her face.
--> delete 'face' after 'distaste'
Thanks a bunch!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Robyn! You have read our Colin right. Let's hope Tania has, if not!!! Thanks for picking out that extra face, when I looked again, I found a few more errors. I must have been blindfolded before I posted! Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sandra.
So Tania has decided to become a private detective and record a conversation at a lunch. That seems a little risky to me. The fact that she believes Mr. Grant had spoken with Colin makes me suspicious about both of them.
Now she needs to find out what has happened, if nothing else, for her own peace of mind. As for me, I don't trust either one of those men if they spoke about this.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Hello Sandra.
So Tania has decided to become a private detective and record a conversation at a lunch. That seems a little risky to me. The fact that she believes Mr. Grant had spoken with Colin makes me suspicious about both of them.
Now she needs to find out what has happened, if nothing else, for her own peace of mind. As for me, I don't trust either one of those men if they spoke about this.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Sometimes it can work, sometimes it can make the problem worse. Tania must be careful. Thank you so much for your continued support, Robert, I really appreciate it. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
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You're welcome Sandra.
RZ
Comment from Wendy G
This chapter does make me want to know more, both about the past and the future. It is well-written,and engaging, Thank you for sharing your story. Looking forward to the next.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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This chapter does make me want to know more, both about the past and the future. It is well-written,and engaging, Thank you for sharing your story. Looking forward to the next.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much, Wendy, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you want to read on. Tania will have to have her wits about her when she meets Colin. Thank you, again! :)) Sandra xxx
