Sunlight
When walking in the shady side of the road.48 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
You have in you the peace everyone craves for, author. :) Whether it is raining, or the snow coming down hard, the warmth that you feel is the light within your soul. So smile at all others, they wish that they were you. This is a good offering for the encouraging poetry contest. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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You have in you the peace everyone craves for, author. :) Whether it is raining, or the snow coming down hard, the warmth that you feel is the light within your soul. So smile at all others, they wish that they were you. This is a good offering for the encouraging poetry contest. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Hi poetwatch, your name is quite cute~thank you for your great evaluation to my work.
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The pleasure is mine, Amada. I liked your poem.
Jose
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
It's true. Sometimes we get a sign that encourages us. Like you,
"I knew that light was intended for me"
A gift from above?
My younger brother died on July 2nd. He suffered these past 5 years with worsening Alzheimer's. That thief! In this Covid year, we had a short graveside service. People wore masks on that July 7th, and kept 6 feet of distance. The Wesleyan minister just finished the final prayer. Almost exactly on the "Amen", a hawk screeched high overhead. All 60-70 people lifted their heads at the same time. It was a sign! Everyone said so. Peter was a talented artist, and one of his favorite subjects was a hawk.
"a sliver of light lit my way,
a sublime and warm embrace." ... a sign, illumination!
And don't let anyone explain it away.
"I believe what I feel ...
a thousand scientific explanations
will not warm my soul"
Nice ending!
Good Luck in the contest!
And thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Hi Mystery Poet,
It's true. Sometimes we get a sign that encourages us. Like you,
"I knew that light was intended for me"
A gift from above?
My younger brother died on July 2nd. He suffered these past 5 years with worsening Alzheimer's. That thief! In this Covid year, we had a short graveside service. People wore masks on that July 7th, and kept 6 feet of distance. The Wesleyan minister just finished the final prayer. Almost exactly on the "Amen", a hawk screeched high overhead. All 60-70 people lifted their heads at the same time. It was a sign! Everyone said so. Peter was a talented artist, and one of his favorite subjects was a hawk.
"a sliver of light lit my way,
a sublime and warm embrace." ... a sign, illumination!
And don't let anyone explain it away.
"I believe what I feel ...
a thousand scientific explanations
will not warm my soul"
Nice ending!
Good Luck in the contest!
And thanks for sharing.
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Kimbob, I know you left a part of your soul tellimg me that touching story about your loss and the sign from above. I have a similar story. I will use 'contact."
Comment from rspoet
Hello Poet,
You've written an excellent free verse poem for the contest.
That ray of light could be random or meaningful,
but faith will warm the soul like no science.
Excellent imagery.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Hello Poet,
You've written an excellent free verse poem for the contest.
That ray of light could be random or meaningful,
but faith will warm the soul like no science.
Excellent imagery.
Nicely done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Robert, your review enlights me.
Comment from kmoss
I relate to this poem a lot. Walking the high/ moral ground, while also looking for validation. The "weather" can affect our souls, but some things bring us peace, whether it be a simple walk or a loving embrace. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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I relate to this poem a lot. Walking the high/ moral ground, while also looking for validation. The "weather" can affect our souls, but some things bring us peace, whether it be a simple walk or a loving embrace. Nicely done!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and reading this poem. I truly appreciate it.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I do believe at times the sun shines just for us. This is a lovely poem with a beautiful picture. It is encouraging to know often the Lord let the sun in just for us. =]
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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I do believe at times the sun shines just for us. This is a lovely poem with a beautiful picture. It is encouraging to know often the Lord let the sun in just for us. =]
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Oh yes, Roxanna, I do believe in the sun shining for me, and you as well.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully said! I agree that we know what our spirit knows - we "walk by faith not by sight." And all the explanations of science cannot begin to explain the mystery of light or the confirmation of faith in life's storms. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Beautifully said! I agree that we know what our spirit knows - we "walk by faith not by sight." And all the explanations of science cannot begin to explain the mystery of light or the confirmation of faith in life's storms. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your cpmments, dear poet.
Comment from joycetreasures
Oh my, this is a sweet and lovely poem. I love your thoughts as you walk on the shady side of the road. I love the image by Andriy P, you used to reflect your beautiful message. I love that you knew the light of that day was for you. I take walks to think about my many blessings also. Yes, your soul will never be harm by scientific explanations. This was a very enjoyable read from beginning to end. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Oh my, this is a sweet and lovely poem. I love your thoughts as you walk on the shady side of the road. I love the image by Andriy P, you used to reflect your beautiful message. I love that you knew the light of that day was for you. I take walks to think about my many blessings also. Yes, your soul will never be harm by scientific explanations. This was a very enjoyable read from beginning to end. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for such a lovely review, Joyce.
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Amada,
You are welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem shows hope for the future and the saving grace of faith. Hope and faith can bring a warmth to your soul.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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This poem shows hope for the future and the saving grace of faith. Hope and faith can bring a warmth to your soul.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthly.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your great comments, dragonpoet.
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You're wlcome, Amada.
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Comment from royowen
Yes indeed, that's the trouble with science, that warmth that the human soul soul craves is never going to be fulfilled by an abundance of scientific information, because this life is going to peter outm and will not be replaced by good news or things, beautifully written, my friend, excellent wisdom, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Yes indeed, that's the trouble with science, that warmth that the human soul soul craves is never going to be fulfilled by an abundance of scientific information, because this life is going to peter outm and will not be replaced by good news or things, beautifully written, my friend, excellent wisdom, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you for your words,Royowen
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very well written and uplifting poem with well chosen artwork. I found it really atmospheric and a good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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This is a very well written and uplifting poem with well chosen artwork. I found it really atmospheric and a good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Jen. Your comments are inspiring.
