Please Try!
A poem of encouragement.20 total reviews
Comment from amada
hi Lisa...I started chuckling while reading your fun lines. For sure I can understand your lines, I am a shy person...lots of people thinks I am not so smart. I am laughing at them, loud people.
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hi Lisa...I started chuckling while reading your fun lines. For sure I can understand your lines, I am a shy person...lots of people thinks I am not so smart. I am laughing at them, loud people.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from damommy
I've always think, will I regret not doing this next year? If the answer is yes, I definitely give it a try. I'm game for just about anything. I like your poem of encouragement.
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I've always think, will I regret not doing this next year? If the answer is yes, I definitely give it a try. I'm game for just about anything. I like your poem of encouragement.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
LisaMay - This poem is fun, motivational and inspiring. I actually think that it has a potential to be a hit song. What music do you think it should be set to? " ... Yes ... Please try ..." - Jerry
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LisaMay - This poem is fun, motivational and inspiring. I actually think that it has a potential to be a hit song. What music do you think it should be set to? " ... Yes ... Please try ..." - Jerry
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from patcelaw
We should all try something new and not just sit and wish. We are capable of learning many new things as we try to do it. I often say to people when they say they wish they could do something, I simply say, "have you tried?
Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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We should all try something new and not just sit and wish. We are capable of learning many new things as we try to do it. I often say to people when they say they wish they could do something, I simply say, "have you tried?
Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020
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Thanks for this wonderful review rating.
That is a very good retort to people being wishy-washy. I've always thought it takes as much effort to wonder whether you can do something as it does to actually try to do it.
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is a very nicely done poem on the way to achieve success in life. I think that there are many shy people that should read this post. It could be a life-changer. Good luck in the contest if it is entered into one. If not it should be. Great job on this one.
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This is a very nicely done poem on the way to achieve success in life. I think that there are many shy people that should read this post. It could be a life-changer. Good luck in the contest if it is entered into one. If not it should be. Great job on this one.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very uplifting writing giving excellent advice to anyone who might be hesitant in taking on a challenge. It is inspirational LisaMay
Good job in getting the message.
Mary
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Very uplifting writing giving excellent advice to anyone who might be hesitant in taking on a challenge. It is inspirational LisaMay
Good job in getting the message.
Mary
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from Wendy G
What a positive and encouraging attitude, expressed well in this lively short poem. Self belief is so important. I enjoyed the style and flow. Thanks for sharing.
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What a positive and encouraging attitude, expressed well in this lively short poem. Self belief is so important. I enjoyed the style and flow. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
Inspirational work ha long been popular and aspiring writers are often urged to have a go at it. One of the earliest inspirational works was Kipling's famousbpoem, 'If'. Its style and sentiments seem a little dated. Perhaps this can take its place.
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Inspirational work ha long been popular and aspiring writers are often urged to have a go at it. One of the earliest inspirational works was Kipling's famousbpoem, 'If'. Its style and sentiments seem a little dated. Perhaps this can take its place.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from lyenochka
What a cheerful exhortation and encouragement! We all need this and especially this would be perfect for newcomers here because I know I was pretty timid when I started here. Thanks for the fun poem that is almost a monorhyme!
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What a cheerful exhortation and encouragement! We all need this and especially this would be perfect for newcomers here because I know I was pretty timid when I started here. Thanks for the fun poem that is almost a monorhyme!
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This should be a team cheer for self-help/support groups! Upbeat and indeed encouraging. Makes me want to go out and train for a marathon (or at least walk a mile).
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This should be a team cheer for self-help/support groups! Upbeat and indeed encouraging. Makes me want to go out and train for a marathon (or at least walk a mile).
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
