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With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Liz O'Neill this chapter. That's What It Was
I found very mysterious to read which kept me wondering what is this thing that is huge and ablaze with fire.
All I can think of it's huge oven?
Gert

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 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your involved review. I'm glad it kept you mystified.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This story chapter is just as intriguing as each previous one. The girls are very curious, and they see and learn new things with each adventure. Well written!

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 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    Thank you for your involved supportive review.