Sojourner In A Finite Space
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very beautifully written poem. Spread the good cheer of your internal sparkle sparkle. Nicely written free verse poem. Great picture to go with your words. Love this style of writing.
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This is a Very beautifully written poem. Spread the good cheer of your internal sparkle sparkle. Nicely written free verse poem. Great picture to go with your words. Love this style of writing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Joanne, thank you for this wonderful review a great capstone to my writing for 2020. May you dance on the key board of life and create beautiful music throughout 2021.
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the feel and flow of your poem. The first few stanzas are a perfect lead in to a meditation. After reading it several times I felt a little more relaxed. Don
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I like the feel and flow of your poem. The first few stanzas are a perfect lead in to a meditation. After reading it several times I felt a little more relaxed. Don
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Don this makes me smile, thank you!
Comment from royowen
Of course God talks about something like this in John 7:38 "whoever believes in me, out of his belly will flow rivers of living water." And I can only say, that as His kids, that will happen through this wondrous gift of writing that you have John, well done John, great write mate. Blessings Roy
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Of course God talks about something like this in John 7:38 "whoever believes in me, out of his belly will flow rivers of living water." And I can only say, that as His kids, that will happen through this wondrous gift of writing that you have John, well done John, great write mate. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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It is Pure Joy to know we are sons of the the great "I AM". Roy, may you dance on the key board of life and create beautiful music throughout 2021.
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Wow you too Jim
Comment from Mastery
Hi Jim. This is a brilliant poem. The words are so inspiring ..especially in times like these, my friend. I especially liked these lines:
" capture the essence of your true Nature
being lovingly restored, enhancing balancing your
whole Beingness...
Happy New Year, my good friend. Bob
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Hi Jim. This is a brilliant poem. The words are so inspiring ..especially in times like these, my friend. I especially liked these lines:
" capture the essence of your true Nature
being lovingly restored, enhancing balancing your
whole Beingness...
Happy New Year, my good friend. Bob
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Bob, thank you for this wonderful six-star review a great capstone to my writing for 2020. May you dance on the key board of life and create beautiful music throughout 2021 your good friend, Jim
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Thanks Jim. :) Bob
Comment from joycetreasures
My goodness!! This is a lovely sparkle of a poem that made me feel really good while reading your message. Your title is perfect, for God has a way of restoring whatever you/we need in life; joy, peace, laughter, calmness, happiness or whatever. I felt like I was in my meditation class breathing in joy, happiness and pleasure. Nicely written.
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My goodness!! This is a lovely sparkle of a poem that made me feel really good while reading your message. Your title is perfect, for God has a way of restoring whatever you/we need in life; joy, peace, laughter, calmness, happiness or whatever. I felt like I was in my meditation class breathing in joy, happiness and pleasure. Nicely written.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Smiling back with Love and Appreciation for the wonderful person you are Joyce. May you dance on the key board of life and create beautiful music throughout 2021.
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Such a lovely quote. Thank you kindly, JLR. May blessings follow you wherever you go in 2021. Happy New Year!!
Comment from karenina
Calming and peaceful free verse. I feel like I ought to have a lotus blossom nearby! I search you tube at times for relaxation guides and haven't yet come upon one as gently whispered as this one. My gosh, I feel like sparkling!--Karenina
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Calming and peaceful free verse. I feel like I ought to have a lotus blossom nearby! I search you tube at times for relaxation guides and haven't yet come upon one as gently whispered as this one. My gosh, I feel like sparkling!--Karenina
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Oh, Karenina, you have been a delight to follow and be followed by throughout this year! May you dance on the key board of life and create beautiful music throughout 2021. Happy New Year!
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Hey! I'm putting that on my bucket list! Dancing on the keyboard of life! Sounds GRAND! Thanks!--Karenina
Comment from Pantygynt
I noted the theme of the week on the club page and have been waiting for the first example. This appears to be it. Reading it I felt was like looking into a kind of verbal kaleidoscope as the freedom of form allows each individual word to sparkle as it might wish to do.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2020
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I noted the theme of the week on the club page and have been waiting for the first example. This appears to be it. Reading it I felt was like looking into a kind of verbal kaleidoscope as the freedom of form allows each individual word to sparkle as it might wish to do.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Thank you, much appreciated. Happy New Year....Boss 🎆👍
Comment from Susan Larson
I love this. It sounds so much like some of the relaxation tapes I listen to. I can just hear the soft music in the background. You may have a whole new opportunity to spread your word out there AND make some money with it!
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I love this. It sounds so much like some of the relaxation tapes I listen to. I can just hear the soft music in the background. You may have a whole new opportunity to spread your word out there AND make some money with it!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Susan thank you, for these outstanding six-stars, what a interesting hypothesis....to ponder.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Excellent entry into the Sparkle free verse event. I found myself breathing along with your poem as you dictated. LOL You seem to be a yoga instructor combined with a poet! :-)
Thank you for sharing
Susan
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Excellent entry into the Sparkle free verse event. I found myself breathing along with your poem as you dictated. LOL You seem to be a yoga instructor combined with a poet! :-)
Thank you for sharing
Susan
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Susan, thank you...I am just a well practiced practioner who tries to live into the present moment everyday.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
God will ensure that after every storm the sun will smile; for every problem, there is a solution, and the soul's indefeasible duty is to be of good cheer. We should trust in HIM and keep up the good cheer! Thank you for sharing the lovely inspiring poem! Wishing you health, wealth, and happiness in the New Year ahead.
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God will ensure that after every storm the sun will smile; for every problem, there is a solution, and the soul's indefeasible duty is to be of good cheer. We should trust in HIM and keep up the good cheer! Thank you for sharing the lovely inspiring poem! Wishing you health, wealth, and happiness in the New Year ahead.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
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Seshardi, The Master promises that all our needs are met, even before we ask the Great I AM to intervene. Thank you very much! May you dance on the keyboards of life and create great music to carry throughout 2021.
