The Tweety show
Tweety was my all-time favourite cartoon, very cute.13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your tribute to Tweety Bird! I liked your Tweety dialogue that you put in. I had forgotten that all those Warner Bros cartoon characters had speech impediments including Sylvester and Tweety (Foghorn, Porky, ...). What I liked about Tweety is despite being small and vulnerable, she always came up on top. I guess that's what the writers were trying to assure us kids. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Loved your tribute to Tweety Bird! I liked your Tweety dialogue that you put in. I had forgotten that all those Warner Bros cartoon characters had speech impediments including Sylvester and Tweety (Foghorn, Porky, ...). What I liked about Tweety is despite being small and vulnerable, she always came up on top. I guess that's what the writers were trying to assure us kids. Thanks for the trip down memory lane. Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hahaha! This is so cute. I love Loony Toones. I used to have a black and white cat, I named him Sylvester.
I see this is a contest entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Hahaha! This is so cute. I love Loony Toones. I used to have a black and white cat, I named him Sylvester.
I see this is a contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Brigitte Elko
I, too, love Tweety.
This was very cute in phrasing the dialect of the cartoon character. The only suggestion I would make is to add punctuation in this line:
Every day I'd come home from school I loved to watch it while my mom had supper on the go. Keep writing.
Blessings,
brigitte
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I, too, love Tweety.
This was very cute in phrasing the dialect of the cartoon character. The only suggestion I would make is to add punctuation in this line:
Every day I'd come home from school I loved to watch it while my mom had supper on the go. Keep writing.
Blessings,
brigitte
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Thank you
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My pleasure.
Brigitte
