Taming the Virus
A club challenge poem17 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is excellent in every respect--timely, descriptive, and uplifting. Personifying the virus is an effective means of characterizing its power, which IS waning!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This poem is excellent in every respect--timely, descriptive, and uplifting. Personifying the virus is an effective means of characterizing its power, which IS waning!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, yes I feel the world is getting on top of this fight, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
This is such a hopeful poem, you are right, we are turning the corner. It's exciting and gratifying how we as a people worked so hard to overcome this pandemic, especially Donald Trump who facilitated the fast track, saving many lives. Thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This is such a hopeful poem, you are right, we are turning the corner. It's exciting and gratifying how we as a people worked so hard to overcome this pandemic, especially Donald Trump who facilitated the fast track, saving many lives. Thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you, yes the countries with good leaders are doing the best now, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Taming the Virus
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Cool .... it's a new poetic form to me. It seems like a lot of rules. The virus has been hard for people all around the world. But things are getting better. I had my first vaccine shot and next month I'll get the last one. Well done!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Taming the Virus
by kahpot
Hello, Kym,
Cool .... it's a new poetic form to me. It seems like a lot of rules. The virus has been hard for people all around the world. But things are getting better. I had my first vaccine shot and next month I'll get the last one. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you, I like to try new forms as they seem to inspire my muse, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
So, my friend, you attempted a Cube poetry format. I admit I had to read it a few times before I could make sense of it, but it seems challenging nonetheless. The best part of it to me is that it starts out sad and dreary, then goes on to a brighter optimistic view that I support very much. My favorite lines are, "by joining minds the world as one find winning signs." Great idea and this is probably the best one I've read about the pandemic!
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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So, my friend, you attempted a Cube poetry format. I admit I had to read it a few times before I could make sense of it, but it seems challenging nonetheless. The best part of it to me is that it starts out sad and dreary, then goes on to a brighter optimistic view that I support very much. My favorite lines are, "by joining minds the world as one find winning signs." Great idea and this is probably the best one I've read about the pandemic!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you my friend, yes I like to try new forms somehow they seem to find my muse, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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I am glad to support your quest to chase your muse, my friend. It is hard to understand a Cube but whatever it takes, go for it!
Jesse
Comment from Sharon Davis
This poem meets the requirements of the cube16 style effectively, sending a positive message on "taming the virus". It is refreshing to focus on the progress being made in this regard.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This poem meets the requirements of the cube16 style effectively, sending a positive message on "taming the virus". It is refreshing to focus on the progress being made in this regard.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
yes we are winning this evil race, if only others would follow the rules it will beg one much sooner
I keep praying that it will and, in Gods time it will all go away.
Thank you fort sharing
Cookie
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Like the photo you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
yes we are winning this evil race, if only others would follow the rules it will beg one much sooner
I keep praying that it will and, in Gods time it will all go away.
Thank you fort sharing
Cookie
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments and review, very much appreciated****kahpot
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It was my pleasure
Cookie
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice presentation background colour and font. Great photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice presentation background colour and font. Great photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2021
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and the encouragement, very much appreciated****kahpot