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thoughts that consume, worry, intrigue, and tickle

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is an awesome tribute to your granddaughter for her 22nd birthday. You did a good job with the rhymes, the smooth flow, and the great imagery. I like how you included how you and she spent time together when she was young. This is an uplifting poem that I'm sure she will treasure.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2021
    Thanks, Jan! I appreciate your kind words and lovely comments! She is a sweetie and I miss seeing her.