Look Beyond
Four Line Poetry29 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this verse, Sally. Your use of contrasts was clever and kept this short one interesting. Great choice for this 4 Line contest... wish you much luck, my friend.
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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I enjoyed reading this verse, Sally. Your use of contrasts was clever and kept this short one interesting. Great choice for this 4 Line contest... wish you much luck, my friend.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my poem, dear Melissa. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Gert sherwood
Your Four Line Poetry Look Beyond
Sally Law your four lines for the contest, is well written, and would help the rain to stop and make us smile.
Yes it's pouring rain Stop and let the sun shine
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Your Four Line Poetry Look Beyond
Sally Law your four lines for the contest, is well written, and would help the rain to stop and make us smile.
Yes it's pouring rain Stop and let the sun shine
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Gert. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?
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You are so welcome Sally Law
Gert
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting! So instead of sunshine, the city lights brought some cheer? Good syllable count and cool picture to illustrate this poem that urges optimism. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Interesting! So instead of sunshine, the city lights brought some cheer? Good syllable count and cool picture to illustrate this poem that urges optimism. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, Helen dear. So glad you enjoyed my short verse. Sending along my very best,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When we have a lovely night arranged, no amount of rain can dampen our night out. 2nd July today and the weather has been warm and sunny, but it will rain tomorrow, I can identify with your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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When we have a lovely night arranged, no amount of rain can dampen our night out. 2nd July today and the weather has been warm and sunny, but it will rain tomorrow, I can identify with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you, dear Dolly. I thought of you?.Sending you my best today and sunny light! Sal XOs?
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sally:
Smooth jazz is my favorite kind. There is something about the sweet, soulful sound of a saxophone that is very comforting. I really like your four-line poem. We are slated to get 2.99" of rain today. Maybe we will get the extra drop to make 3"! :>}
Good luck in the contest.
Jan
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Sally:
Smooth jazz is my favorite kind. There is something about the sweet, soulful sound of a saxophone that is very comforting. I really like your four-line poem. We are slated to get 2.99" of rain today. Maybe we will get the extra drop to make 3"! :>}
Good luck in the contest.
Jan
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind comments. We are expecting downpours all day. It?s been very rainy here in Florida. A hurricane approaches?.Take care, my friend,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a timely poem for our area. It has rained for 3 days, & is scheduled to rain 2 more, 2 days off then 4 more. I hope our dirt road holds up. Fortunately, I don't work any more so have no need to drive down it. I have plenty of bananas, my staple, so I'm all set. It's my neighbors I think of.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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This is a timely poem for our area. It has rained for 3 days, & is scheduled to rain 2 more, 2 days off then 4 more. I hope our dirt road holds up. Fortunately, I don't work any more so have no need to drive down it. I have plenty of bananas, my staple, so I'm all set. It's my neighbors I think of.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Yep, we are getting it today. I long for city lights and sunshine after rain. Sending you my best and many thanks,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sal.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Ironic that you should
write about rain; it has
been pouring here off and on
since yesterday; in fact, it just
started up again as I am reviewing this.
-I like the brightness of the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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-Nice artwork and
presentation, Sal.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Ironic that you should
write about rain; it has
been pouring here off and on
since yesterday; in fact, it just
started up again as I am reviewing this.
-I like the brightness of the concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Pam. It is greatly appreciated and needed. Sending you my best today as always
Sal XOs...
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You are very welcome, Sal, and I am glad you appreciated it.
Comment from Chris Davies
Hello Sally Law. Loved your four line poem. It goes perfectly with the picture. As always, your writing is stellar. Hope you win the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Hello Sally Law. Loved your four line poem. It goes perfectly with the picture. As always, your writing is stellar. Hope you win the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Chris!!! How are you? Long time no see. How wonderful this is! Thanks so much for stopping by. I was feeling low today because I'd lost so many this year for one reason or another. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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I know. I missed you, too. I had to finish the book I was working on, and FanStory was way too much fun. I'm fancy free now and writing for fun. I'll look forward to whatever you're writing.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
City lights are always cheerful. It's been raining a lot here in Texas and my section of Texas is usually hot and dry. I don't do hot and humid, although it's not been the above 100 degrees we usually have. but in the low 90's. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
My youngest son, Steven used to fall asleep listening to sax music, when he was little.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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City lights are always cheerful. It's been raining a lot here in Texas and my section of Texas is usually hot and dry. I don't do hot and humid, although it's not been the above 100 degrees we usually have. but in the low 90's. I enjoyed reading your contest entry and wish you the best of luck.
My youngest son, Steven used to fall asleep listening to sax music, when he was little.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. It's been rainy daily for weeks, thus this post. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
I loved you poem. Lights are magical in the rain. I love seeing rain on the flower petals too. Actually, I love rain and when others are mourning because it it raining too much, I'm praying for more. It means the Lord waters my flowers for me. I enjoyed the song.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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I loved you poem. Lights are magical in the rain. I love seeing rain on the flower petals too. Actually, I love rain and when others are mourning because it it raining too much, I'm praying for more. It means the Lord waters my flowers for me. I enjoyed the song.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the kind review of my contest entry. It is greatly appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...