End or Beginning for America
As a person thinks and speaks, so it will be!23 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I understand your deep frustration with the last few years. They have indeed been dark and dangerous times for the world and for humanity. I don't share your faith that God will somehow save us from ourselves as I am not much of a believer. But well expressed.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I understand your deep frustration with the last few years. They have indeed been dark and dangerous times for the world and for humanity. I don't share your faith that God will somehow save us from ourselves as I am not much of a believer. But well expressed.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and your time. I certainly have struggled with my beliefs. I can tell you they are not as they used to be. When God starts the process of opening eyes, revealing hidden mysteries that we are told to seek out, the more and more the "church system" is exposed to down trodden and suppressing people. They continue to make God small, very smal, making you small right along side. Regardless if one is a believer or a non believer, this shift happening can be felt. You just know that there are changes coming and Big they will be. God is big, huge, massive. Even eternity He is! We are all one and I believe we will all return to our creator and source. I also believe the collective can turn it around when they stop, pray and give over to God, the Universe. So believing in yourself is believing in God! Our true nature, identity, power and ability have been robbed, stolen and killed. Thank you again and have a great and positive week ahead.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I feel your pain here as you record the events taking place in America and the unrest and dissatisfaction people feel and it starts at the top and filers down to the man on the street. With a steady Government, the country will feel at ease. A good leader can bring calm and stability. I agree that the lack of knowledge and vision plays a part here. These are powerful and poignant words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I feel your pain here as you record the events taking place in America and the unrest and dissatisfaction people feel and it starts at the top and filers down to the man on the street. With a steady Government, the country will feel at ease. A good leader can bring calm and stability. I agree that the lack of knowledge and vision plays a part here. These are powerful and poignant words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thanks Dolly for your review and as always your time. Yes ma'am, there so many changes and events taking place and quickly. Each of us affected in some way and I pray that "We the people" take a stand for right. Otherwise "We the people" will be removed and/or replaced. Scary to see the new American way is right is wrong and wrong is right. Thanks again and I hope you have a great and positive week.
Comment from Boogienights
This is well written and a very interesting poem. I agree with a lot of what you say, but I'm not sure divine intervention will save us as we are so far gone. People attacking people in the street and getting out of jail right away, police being disrespected, racial division worst then ever. I hope God steps in to help. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is well written and a very interesting poem. I agree with a lot of what you say, but I'm not sure divine intervention will save us as we are so far gone. People attacking people in the street and getting out of jail right away, police being disrespected, racial division worst then ever. I hope God steps in to help. Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and your time, I appreciate it very much. I do know that God does not strive with man all ways. The ego (edging God out) has always caused us to think we have the answers and can call the shots. It is a fearful thing to fall into the hands of a living God. Everyday "We the people" speak louder and louder as to where their hearts are. Appears to be far away from their creator, that is for sure. Thank you again and have a great and positive week ahead!
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. I don't know what else is going to happen in this world. We are living in crazy dangerous times. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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I like how you structured this poem. I don't know what else is going to happen in this world. We are living in crazy dangerous times. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and for your time, I appreciate it very much. I believe many of us are unsure about many things in this NWO unfolding. It is all happening quickly and hard to keep up with what is happening. Meanwhile they dummy us down with their devices, calling right wrong and wrong right. Thank you again and enjoy your week!
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You're welcome!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem of aabb quatrains reviews all the craziness of the pandemic and the troubles Trump and his followers caused to destabilize our democracy.
I hope your prayer at the end comes true. That we are returned to the democracy we are used to and not have votes taken away as some want.
Faith and prayer will help.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This poem of aabb quatrains reviews all the craziness of the pandemic and the troubles Trump and his followers caused to destabilize our democracy.
I hope your prayer at the end comes true. That we are returned to the democracy we are used to and not have votes taken away as some want.
Faith and prayer will help.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and your time. Appreciate it very much as time is priceless. "We the people" need to stand up and speak up against this NWO of good is bad and bad is good, right is wrong and wrong is right. This is what seems to be the new American way and I say "NO WAY". I personally do not want authority and say of others to dictate rest of my days and the days of the generation to follow and follow and follow...especially with the plan they have to fatten their pockets and dummy us down. Thanks again and have a great and positive week!
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My pleasure, Jennifer. I agree with you.
You enjoy your week too.
Joan
Comment from estory
The hectic flow of the language underscores the hectic images of the public opinion torn in different directions by the opinion manipulating media. We end up with a vision of a country coming apart, losing its bearings, forsaking its ideals for some new vision of socialism and globalism. It all comes down to forsaking the faith. America is turning away from its faith in God, and embracing this socialist, humanist philosophy that we once fought against. Ironic, isn't it? estory
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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The hectic flow of the language underscores the hectic images of the public opinion torn in different directions by the opinion manipulating media. We end up with a vision of a country coming apart, losing its bearings, forsaking its ideals for some new vision of socialism and globalism. It all comes down to forsaking the faith. America is turning away from its faith in God, and embracing this socialist, humanist philosophy that we once fought against. Ironic, isn't it? estory
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and your time. One thing I have learned is a house divided will not stand. We see it every day from families to officials. May "We the people" stand for what is right instead of the NWO way of bad is good and good is bad! Thank you again and I hope you enjoy the week!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
End or Beginning for America
by Jennifer L Newcomb
If we don't do something, we will loose our democracy. The crazy vote counts in Arizona and more places next done by the cyber Ninjas...a company with no experience... it's a very dangerous thing. I pray we will turn things around for the good of America.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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End or Beginning for America
by Jennifer L Newcomb
If we don't do something, we will loose our democracy. The crazy vote counts in Arizona and more places next done by the cyber Ninjas...a company with no experience... it's a very dangerous thing. I pray we will turn things around for the good of America.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review, I appreciate your time as time is priceless and precious. All I know is
"We the people" need to stand up for right not wrong. It seems the American way is good is bad and bad is good. Thanks again and have great and positive week!
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you for this enlightening post. I just prayed again this morning earnestly for America. It's easy to discern that this new administration does not have our best interest at heart. They are a wicked brood, hell bent on controlling us and destroying us from within. The King of Ninevah lead the Assyrian capital with repentance and humility, calling for a fast. Our leaders mock God at every turn. The end of days is here as far as I can tell and Jesus will return as promised. I'm telling everyone I know about the Lord and encouraging those astray to return to Him. Sending you my best for this marvelous piece,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this enlightening post. I just prayed again this morning earnestly for America. It's easy to discern that this new administration does not have our best interest at heart. They are a wicked brood, hell bent on controlling us and destroying us from within. The King of Ninevah lead the Assyrian capital with repentance and humility, calling for a fast. Our leaders mock God at every turn. The end of days is here as far as I can tell and Jesus will return as promised. I'm telling everyone I know about the Lord and encouraging those astray to return to Him. Sending you my best for this marvelous piece,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 04-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thank you Sally again for the time you take to read and review my poems. They are inspired of the Lord and they are Him speaking. He is massive, huge, big. Eternity He is. There is no thing that we are unable to change with Him by our side. The problem is and always has been, man wanting to be their own god. Believe you me, we are all about to see every knee bow and tongue confess. "Then they will know that I AM the Lord thy God"....oh happy day! Thank you again and enjoy the rest of your week!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes unfortunately confusion does reign at this time, way to many lies and deception, there is truth out there we just need someone to tell it, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Excellent, yes unfortunately confusion does reign at this time, way to many lies and deception, there is truth out there we just need someone to tell it, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your kind thoughts. All the reviews I have read are a direct touch from Him. One alone only knows his/her conversations and prayers with and to Him. With each one He remind me I am on the right path and it is only my reasonable service to TELL IT! Thank you again and enjoy the rest of your week!
Comment from Lana Marie
First of all, I really love the picture you picked. It's shows how there is life on the other side. You did a great job expressing your beliefs throughout the well rhymed poem.
Yes people will perish for their lack of knowledge, but hopefully a few more will believe with the seeds that this poem will drop and grow in the hearts of the readers.
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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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First of all, I really love the picture you picked. It's shows how there is life on the other side. You did a great job expressing your beliefs throughout the well rhymed poem.
Yes people will perish for their lack of knowledge, but hopefully a few more will believe with the seeds that this poem will drop and grow in the hearts of the readers.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind thoughts as well as your time to read and review. The confirmation in your review was overwhelming. I felt my spirit team pressing in with a question. What is it you really want? After reading the reviews, with special mention to yours, I want to introduce the God I know with a planting of a seed within the heart. If it is planted, I know He will give increase. With that said, I remain humble and grateful because I know what that touch from Him can do inside someone. I often receive downloads of information that most are not willing to search out the matter on. So my thoughts will get carried captive, as these messages are not for the faint of heart and often unbelievable. We must however take heed to them. I thank Him for my cloud of witnesses that He sent for what He was about to reveal to me. I couldn't make it up if I tried lol.
Thank you and enjoy the rest of your week.
