A Child's Complaint
Children avoid cleaning. Moms find things stashed.20 total reviews
Comment from Eunice Amero
This is such a sweet poem. A bit funny. I love it. So much like children. Keep up the good work. You did a great job. I think we are all or were when we were young. Kids will be kids.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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This is such a sweet poem. A bit funny. I love it. So much like children. Keep up the good work. You did a great job. I think we are all or were when we were young. Kids will be kids.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2021
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So glad you enjoyed this post. Thank you for your generous review. The six-star review is an honor for the work I have done on this. Thank you kindly.
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you are more than welcome
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever use of the necessary words in a smooth unforced way. It flows well, and one can almost hear the complaint in the child's voice. The photo you have included is the perfect choice. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Very clever use of the necessary words in a smooth unforced way. It flows well, and one can almost hear the complaint in the child's voice. The photo you have included is the perfect choice. Well done. Good wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
Comment from Janet Foor
Chores does seem like a bad word to children everywhere.
You did an excellent job using the assigned words and writing a fun poem.
Well done
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Chores does seem like a bad word to children everywhere.
You did an excellent job using the assigned words and writing a fun poem.
Well done
Janet
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
Comment from Sharon Davis
A very well composed poem that uses the required words efficiently and effectively.
The poem has a undertone of humour which engages and entertains.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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A very well composed poem that uses the required words efficiently and effectively.
The poem has a undertone of humour which engages and entertains.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem . You have made great use of the suggested words. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice photo to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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This is a nicely written poem . You have made great use of the suggested words. Great flow and rhyme scheme. Nice photo to compliment your poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
Comment from Senyai
Hi,
Bwaahaha! Your nailed this one. Your poem says it all... my father used to tell me over Saturday morning breakfast, "You need to clean your room and help your mother today." Every Saturday!
This poem was so well written with the exact sentiment I had as a child. Why should anyone care what my room looks like but me?
Well done with such an enjoyable post.
Senyai
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Hi,
Bwaahaha! Your nailed this one. Your poem says it all... my father used to tell me over Saturday morning breakfast, "You need to clean your room and help your mother today." Every Saturday!
This poem was so well written with the exact sentiment I had as a child. Why should anyone care what my room looks like but me?
Well done with such an enjoyable post.
Senyai
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
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Yes, they do grow up :-)
Great poem.
Senyai
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute poem for the contest. I like the way you worked in the required words. You have a good rhyme scheme throughout. Isn't it interesting how children never see a mess? Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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This is a cute poem for the contest. I like the way you worked in the required words. You have a good rhyme scheme throughout. Isn't it interesting how children never see a mess? Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
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I'm waiting for that day! LOL!
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent use of the contest words. The poem and the artwork that you have selected are clearly meant for one another. Expertly crafted poem. Thank you for the chuckle and the smile. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Excellent use of the contest words. The poem and the artwork that you have selected are clearly meant for one another. Expertly crafted poem. Thank you for the chuckle and the smile. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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I am so honored and thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
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You're Welcome!
Comment from Lisa Marcelina
Oh, I loved this! I smiled as I read because this is exactly what my own children do and say, especially my youngest daughter.
In our case, the father is the OCD one who fusses about the rooms being in a mess.
You used the provided words really and crafted an engaging, entertaining poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Oh, I loved this! I smiled as I read because this is exactly what my own children do and say, especially my youngest daughter.
In our case, the father is the OCD one who fusses about the rooms being in a mess.
You used the provided words really and crafted an engaging, entertaining poem.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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I am so honored and thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
Comment from royowen
I guess the thing that way lays all human beings, especially in the west where things are relatively easy, we have an attitude of entitlement, and I guess this spills into our "slightly" spoilt children. Beautifully written my friend, you've covered all the required words, and written a great poem. In tetrametric stanzas articulate aabb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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I guess the thing that way lays all human beings, especially in the west where things are relatively easy, we have an attitude of entitlement, and I guess this spills into our "slightly" spoilt children. Beautifully written my friend, you've covered all the required words, and written a great poem. In tetrametric stanzas articulate aabb rhyming, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 05-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2021
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Thank you so very much for your complimentary review. This was my daughter when she was young but since she has become a parent her house is so clean one could eat off her floors. Sometimes they do grow up.
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Well done
