Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

CA lovely statement about Autumn in 11 syllables. Well done. The words and the lovely picture accompanying it express your feelings. Much enjoyed. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2021

Thanks very much!

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

I found the last line to be somewhat disjointed from the first two lines.

It almost felt it was part of a different poem.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

It was the best I could do and rhyme too.

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written 3 5 3. Very beautiful
Lovely Photo to compliment your words. Autumn is such a beautiful time of year. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks, I wish I was doing well in the contest.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I was trying to work out the pumpkins connection but failed. A qualifying entry in this lune poetry contest, and a great subject about now. It's spring here. Beautifully done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Pumpkins in an autumn thing

reply by royowen on 08-Sep-2021

I live in Australia, sorry

reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

That is ok

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

one of the things I love the most about autumn is the
colors...truly one of Mother natures greatest achievements...that and I love the smell of the holidays...
love your poem ...very nicely written...and i love your picture...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks so much. Too bad it is not doing well in the contest

reply by l.raven on 08-Sep-2021

sigh...give it time...
and your so very welcome...love xxoo

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is a nice poem and the picture is perfect. I think it would be better presented if you centered it though. It would stand out more if you could bold it, too. I didn't know how to do it on site so I just cut it and pasted it on a document, hit bold and cut and pasted it back on the site. You might know more about the online workings that I do. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks, no votes yet.

reply by Mary Shifman on 08-Sep-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from SHABAMO

Excellent

Hi, I think you did a good job with the poem overall, and you included different seasons. However I think the final line of "so is snow" would be better used talking about leaves or fall. The picture is also only fall with no snow. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thank you.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Nature 3-5-3 contest entry speaks you love the beauties of Nature, for example autumn trees and snow; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

You are welcome.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nature 3-5-3, Autumn Trees, has the proper formatting and lets us get into the mood to acept that summer is waning and winter on the rise.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Yes, thanks.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I feel the same way and find beauty in all the seasons. I enjoyed your beautiful poem and short verse 3-5-3.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally XOs

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2021

Thanks very much!