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With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking

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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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What a nice Indian chef who is willing to part his valuable watch to rescue these two ladies away from the lusty garage guy.

Well done.

Please fix the funny characters in the Background:
Liz�¢??s car


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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2021
    Thank you for your involved review. Those characters that stand for an apostrophe are annoying. Writers don't notice them unless they are pointed out to them thank you.
    The reason Tommy is willing to help these ladies is because his sister was one of the teens they rescued. I'm glad you enjoyed it.