We the People
A Trimeric22 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
The sport of 'bash the boss' is in season again, though the boss has changed, the bash has not. I suppose that is politics for you. What you need is a third party, strong enough to be taken seriously but weak enough to be unlikely to actually win an election, like our liberal democrats. I cheerfully support these guys in the certain knowledge that, as a result, I can never be blamed for the way things turn out.
The poem follows the requirements of the trimeric perfectly.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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The sport of 'bash the boss' is in season again, though the boss has changed, the bash has not. I suppose that is politics for you. What you need is a third party, strong enough to be taken seriously but weak enough to be unlikely to actually win an election, like our liberal democrats. I cheerfully support these guys in the certain knowledge that, as a result, I can never be blamed for the way things turn out.
The poem follows the requirements of the trimeric perfectly.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I rarely say anything remotely political on here. But this just wouldn't quit nagging at me. hahahaha. Thanks, Jim.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Such eloquent statements you make in this poem. You are so right in saying 'It's time.' The so-called journalists have abandoned their duty. They are blatantly wearing blinders when it comes to the mess that is being made of such a beautiful country. You need all hands on deck to keep the ship from sinking.
Well done.
Ralf
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Such eloquent statements you make in this poem. You are so right in saying 'It's time.' The so-called journalists have abandoned their duty. They are blatantly wearing blinders when it comes to the mess that is being made of such a beautiful country. You need all hands on deck to keep the ship from sinking.
Well done.
Ralf
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review, and for standing with me on this.
Comment from tfawcus
First of all, a very happy birthday to you! I've just read Roy's lovely poem written in honour of the occasion.
I think your poem here expresses a feeling that many people share, not only in America, either. The sixth star is for your careful selection of lines in the first stanza. They build beautifully to reinforce the point you are making as they recur in the following stanzas. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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First of all, a very happy birthday to you! I've just read Roy's lovely poem written in honour of the occasion.
I think your poem here expresses a feeling that many people share, not only in America, either. The sixth star is for your careful selection of lines in the first stanza. They build beautifully to reinforce the point you are making as they recur in the following stanzas. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Tony. High praise from a writer like you. Thanks for the birthday wishes, too. I had a grand day.
Comment from Ben Colder
I think we the people are in for a rude awakening. Nero played while Rome burned. Today the same. The fiddler and the cat. Woe unto those who lose their freedom. Good poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I think we the people are in for a rude awakening. Nero played while Rome burned. Today the same. The fiddler and the cat. Woe unto those who lose their freedom. Good poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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We don't know the outcome, but I know it won't be good. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from karenina
A form I'd like to try! Looks challenging and could lend itself to all sorts of themes! I try to leave politics on the curb when reviewing. One man's propaganda is another's truth these days. Suffice to say you managed to address bullet points of the day in a tastefully poetic way!
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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A form I'd like to try! Looks challenging and could lend itself to all sorts of themes! I try to leave politics on the curb when reviewing. One man's propaganda is another's truth these days. Suffice to say you managed to address bullet points of the day in a tastefully poetic way!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I rarely say anything political here, but I couldn't resist this.
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Well handled my friend! Must be the birthday afterglow...
Karenina
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your fear is real here and once the youngsters learn anarchistic behaviour it is hard to stop the trend. A well written and poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Your fear is real here and once the youngsters learn anarchistic behaviour it is hard to stop the trend. A well written and poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the review, and for understanding.
Comment from T B Botts
Well said Yvonne. I'm so pleased that you have written what is on your heart, regardless of others may say. I feel so betrayed by our representatives, and the fools in the media keep pushing an agenda that is tearing apart our country. Fear is being used as a weapon and unfortunately it appears that large numbers of people are allowing themselves to be duped. I believe Ben Franklin said that those who are willing to sacrifice freedom for safety deserve neither. Thanks for taking a stand. I'm right there with you gal.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Well said Yvonne. I'm so pleased that you have written what is on your heart, regardless of others may say. I feel so betrayed by our representatives, and the fools in the media keep pushing an agenda that is tearing apart our country. Fear is being used as a weapon and unfortunately it appears that large numbers of people are allowing themselves to be duped. I believe Ben Franklin said that those who are willing to sacrifice freedom for safety deserve neither. Thanks for taking a stand. I'm right there with you gal.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review, and for standing with me. I appreciate that.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
BRAVO! You did an excellent job, Yvonne. Your club poem tells it like it is without any fluff or lies. You did a great job with the trimeric style. Your lines read well, the rhymes work, and your message is loud and clear. The image is perfect, too. Everything you mentioned is true. The American people must make a stand for any change for the better to take place. Every day, we don't, it's becoming more difficult to overcome what is causing the USA to spiral downward.
Thanks for sharing and caring.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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BRAVO! You did an excellent job, Yvonne. Your club poem tells it like it is without any fluff or lies. You did a great job with the trimeric style. Your lines read well, the rhymes work, and your message is loud and clear. The image is perfect, too. Everything you mentioned is true. The American people must make a stand for any change for the better to take place. Every day, we don't, it's becoming more difficult to overcome what is causing the USA to spiral downward.
Thanks for sharing and caring.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and stars. I'm afraid it may be too late for our beloved country.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Wish I had 6 stars for you - this is fantastic and so true and also just what I am feeling!! A civil war is coming and maybe even the Rapture, for there is no fixing things the way they are now. You are loved by me deeply and I am going ahead to say it while I can still speak my own mind! Excellent writing here and a new form for me to learn!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Wish I had 6 stars for you - this is fantastic and so true and also just what I am feeling!! A civil war is coming and maybe even the Rapture, for there is no fixing things the way they are now. You are loved by me deeply and I am going ahead to say it while I can still speak my own mind! Excellent writing here and a new form for me to learn!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much, Sherry. I love you, too, dear friend, and appreciate you so much. Take care of yourself and keep in touch.
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Blessing to you!!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, I am so sorry I am out of sixes my sweet friend...your poem is dead on...
it's time for us to make a stand...but I am happy to see
in some place in our country...people are now protesting...
in large numbers...we just have to keep coming...
all over the world they are out in the millions...this government is evil...sigh...
love your poem sweet girl...and sooooo love your picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hi Yvonne, I am so sorry I am out of sixes my sweet friend...your poem is dead on...
it's time for us to make a stand...but I am happy to see
in some place in our country...people are now protesting...
in large numbers...we just have to keep coming...
all over the world they are out in the millions...this government is evil...sigh...
love your poem sweet girl...and sooooo love your picture...very well written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review.
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your sooooo very welcome...
we're going to pull out of this with God's help...we just have to help as well...love xxoo this should of had a six...******
