Business is Business
A hit man promises revenge17 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
I love it! Somehow it doesn't really seem violent, because it's funny in the end. You painted a good pictures of the players characters and looks. It turned out to be a fun read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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I love it! Somehow it doesn't really seem violent, because it's funny in the end. You painted a good pictures of the players characters and looks. It turned out to be a fun read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed my story.
Comment from Kooky Clown
Yes this does it for me a great read and a lovely twist in the last line which I thought was excellent I was imagining that Vito was going run off with Maria so you proved me wrong on that. Well written as I said a great read. Well done. Kooky.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Yes this does it for me a great read and a lovely twist in the last line which I thought was excellent I was imagining that Vito was going run off with Maria so you proved me wrong on that. Well written as I said a great read. Well done. Kooky.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review. Glad you enjoyed my story.
Comment from Eunice Amero
Baby you can write. What a story. I truely enjoyed it abd wantedto hear more. This is good. You are a professional. You sure have a good story. I felt l was watching a movie. Thank you so much for sharing. You deserve to win. Only someone like you can l can't.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Baby you can write. What a story. I truely enjoyed it abd wantedto hear more. This is good. You are a professional. You sure have a good story. I felt l was watching a movie. Thank you so much for sharing. You deserve to win. Only someone like you can l can't.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review!
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I loved it you are so welcome
Comment from writer723
I enjoyed reading your very engaging story. I felt drawn in and interested from beginning to end, waiting to see what would happen next. You delivered the action with skill and the pacing was excellent. Fantastic job!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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I enjoyed reading your very engaging story. I felt drawn in and interested from beginning to end, waiting to see what would happen next. You delivered the action with skill and the pacing was excellent. Fantastic job!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading and for the review.
Comment from L. Kalere
An excellent storyline, skillfully written, with a killer of an ending. I thoroughly enjoyed every word, and it's clear that you mastered the prompts for revenge, gave us the bonus of a clever twist or two, and topped it off with a dollop of irony... a feast of a story. So glad I still had a six!
Linda
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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An excellent storyline, skillfully written, with a killer of an ending. I thoroughly enjoyed every word, and it's clear that you mastered the prompts for revenge, gave us the bonus of a clever twist or two, and topped it off with a dollop of irony... a feast of a story. So glad I still had a six!
Linda
Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your feedback and encouragement!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Fiction, Best Served Cold writing prompt entry, speaks interestingly about a hit man promises revenge on the theme business is business; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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This Fiction, Best Served Cold writing prompt entry, speaks interestingly about a hit man promises revenge on the theme business is business; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading. Blessings.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant! Fast-paced and masterfully narrated--stunning phrasing--chilling characters masterfully drawn--graphic imagery--priceless punchline! I peg this as a winner.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Brilliant! Fast-paced and masterfully narrated--stunning phrasing--chilling characters masterfully drawn--graphic imagery--priceless punchline! I peg this as a winner.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading and for your encouragement.