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The Pretty Kitty

The City Kitty

20 total reviews 
Comment from GollyGreen32
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Hi! I loved your story. The phonics and phonemes felt natural and fun. I liked how Sissy wanted a hat to look prettier, and I liked the ending. It made me laugh. Great job on the story. Have a blessed and Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Terry Broxson
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What a hoot! A great contest entry, good luck. I got a little dizzy reading it myself. I am not sure imagery is the right word, but I did love the thought of seeing these two cats having that dialogue. Very well done!

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2021


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    Thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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What a cute contest entry, Mystery Author. You handled the prompt well. I enjoyed reading your entry. Your words are well chosen and sound just like a discussion between 'real' sisters. The art choice is adorable.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review!
Comment from prettybluebirds
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You made this crazy old cat lady happy with this short story. It is so cute and I love it. The words do make the reader a bit dizzy at times, but I guess that is the point of the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this nice review.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this nice review.
Comment from royowen
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I think if I'm any judge of the contest requirements, without actually reading the other entries, I would have to say this was the winner, but I haven't, but this is certainly an incredibly good one, and must fare well. Beautifully written, good Luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review.
reply by royowen on 24-Dec-2021
    Most welcome
reply by royowen on 24-Dec-2021
    Welcome
Comment from lyenochka
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I think you met the challenge well, with lots of rhymes and repetition which make it fun for children to read a story. The city name of McVitty may be the hardest for a child to read. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review. I will think about the city name.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review. I will think about the city name.
Comment from RShipp
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I believe you have adhered to the rules of the contest .

Quite a challenge.

Best of luck in the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you!
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    Thank you!
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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Perfect entry for the Phonics and Phonemes Challenge contest! This story is indeed great and held my attention throughout the piece;-)

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thank you for this review!
reply by Melodie Michelle on 24-Dec-2021
    ;-)
Comment from lindafisher
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What a pretty kitty she is. This is truly amazing. I love that you found all these similar words and put them together to make a cute children's story. Well done my friend.

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 Comment Written 24-Dec-2021


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    Thank you!
Comment from Gee
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I loved it.
nicely done.
I admit, my mind got a little fizzy listening to missy and sissy.
I hope sissy does get her pretty itty bitty kitty cat hat to walk around the city of McVitty.


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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
    haha, thank you very much.