Earth's Magnificent Moon
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Earth's Moon"Poems, stories and fact about about our moon.
24 total reviews
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
You have TRANSPARENTLY depicted beauty and the related glamorous colors from the new moon onward up to the full moon incorporating beautifully all the 'A to Z' letters.
Impressive phraseology;
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
A very TOUGH job Indeed!
LAUDABLE Attempt!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Hello Friend,
You have TRANSPARENTLY depicted beauty and the related glamorous colors from the new moon onward up to the full moon incorporating beautifully all the 'A to Z' letters.
Impressive phraseology;
Enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
A very TOUGH job Indeed!
LAUDABLE Attempt!!
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and for the nice comments. I'm so pleased that you like it.
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Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from lyenochka
Fantastic word choices of X, Y, and Z. You were clever to allude to another poem with Xanadu-like. I liked the "young as a new moon; old as Earth." Great rhymes throughout while taking us through phases of the moon! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Fantastic word choices of X, Y, and Z. You were clever to allude to another poem with Xanadu-like. I liked the "young as a new moon; old as Earth." Great rhymes throughout while taking us through phases of the moon! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you Helen, I truly appreciate the review and comments. Those last three letter aren't so easy.
Comment from Wendy G
Congratulations on composing a meaningful ABC ... Z poem, which also has smooth and unforced rhyme and excellent metre - as well as sensible words! This is not easy to do, so I wish you every success in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on composing a meaningful ABC ... Z poem, which also has smooth and unforced rhyme and excellent metre - as well as sensible words! This is not easy to do, so I wish you every success in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much Wendy. I really appreciate the review and nice comments.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Whoever wrote this poem has aced this contest. The wording is perfect.
I like the picture. And the words tell the story of the way things are in the universe. I liked reading this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Whoever wrote this poem has aced this contest. The wording is perfect.
I like the picture. And the words tell the story of the way things are in the universe. I liked reading this poem.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you Carolyn. I really appreciate the review and the affirmative comments. I'm so glad you like it.
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Yes, and you are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
I really like your poem about our moon.
You strike up some powerful. Images.
Nice rhyme scheme.
The last stanza is a fantastic way to end your work.
Excellent poem.
Best wishes,
good luck,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Author,
I really like your poem about our moon.
You strike up some powerful. Images.
Nice rhyme scheme.
The last stanza is a fantastic way to end your work.
Excellent poem.
Best wishes,
good luck,
Cindy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you Cindy. I really appreciate your review and lovely comments on my poem.
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was great! I loved how you managed to both do the abecdearian format while also having a consistent rhyme scheme. The imagery was so vivid and evokes the energy of the moon exactly.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This was great! I loved how you managed to both do the abecdearian format while also having a consistent rhyme scheme. The imagery was so vivid and evokes the energy of the moon exactly.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and the excellent comments on my poem.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Brillant poem, you nailed the format and had a consistent theme throughout. Wonderful poem filled with awe, mystery and beauty of the world all around us.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Brillant poem, you nailed the format and had a consistent theme throughout. Wonderful poem filled with awe, mystery and beauty of the world all around us.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much, Jake. I pleased that you liked my poem about the moon.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You certainly know your moon phases here and our ever changing moon is constantly on the run and changing shape to keep us amused, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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You certainly know your moon phases here and our ever changing moon is constantly on the run and changing shape to keep us amused, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you Dolly, I'm so glad you liked my poem. I enjoyed reading you comments.
Comment from Thatguypk
This is excellent. I was so immersed in the imagery of the poem that I didn't even notice until the end that it was an Abecedarian poem. Skillfully and beautifully written. A winner, maybe! :-)
PK
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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This is excellent. I was so immersed in the imagery of the poem that I didn't even notice until the end that it was an Abecedarian poem. Skillfully and beautifully written. A winner, maybe! :-)
PK
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for the review and for the six stars. That you didn't notice it was an Abecedarian poem is high praise and I appreciate it.
Comment from Eugenette Morin
Very nice movement of time, so many different ways to say it's passing. I enjoy the moon's phases, its rhythms are well expressed in your poem. Well done
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Very nice movement of time, so many different ways to say it's passing. I enjoy the moon's phases, its rhythms are well expressed in your poem. Well done
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you Eugenette. I see you are fairly new on FanStory. Welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy it. It the future if you give four star rating you'll probably want to explain ways you think the poem could be improved. I appreciate your comments.
