War Free World
4 Line Poem 2 4 4 12 Syllable Dedicated to Wise Men to Act 444 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I respect and agree with your words and yes, God will act in His own way to bring about peace in His time. He also lays it on the hearts of many to aim for and work towards this goal. (I'm sorry, I found your notes a little confusing, but I have tried to understand and evaluate your words in the poem).
Wendy
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I respect and agree with your words and yes, God will act in His own way to bring about peace in His time. He also lays it on the hearts of many to aim for and work towards this goal. (I'm sorry, I found your notes a little confusing, but I have tried to understand and evaluate your words in the poem).
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this compassionately written poem. The depth of your faith is all apparent and admirable. You see the world through God's eyes, but all do not. Despite those differences, we all want the same outcome. Plainly put, a war-free world. Well done!
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I enjoyed this compassionately written poem. The depth of your faith is all apparent and admirable. You see the world through God's eyes, but all do not. Despite those differences, we all want the same outcome. Plainly put, a war-free world. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' War Free World ', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. this talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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' War Free World ', is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. this talented poet's work was a privilege to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem vividly describes the power of Almighty God. So many do not recognize--or even want to hear--the still, small voice of the Lord, concerning war or anything else.
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Your ultra-concise poem vividly describes the power of Almighty God. So many do not recognize--or even want to hear--the still, small voice of the Lord, concerning war or anything else.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your entry is well presented. I like the image and the use of the colored fonts in your poem. Your statement flows well with a great message.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
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Your entry is well presented. I like the image and the use of the colored fonts in your poem. Your statement flows well with a great message.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Eugenette Morin
I agree that God can whisper the desire for peace in men and thus achieve a war-free world. It is not God that is limited but man's evolution and current vibrational presence that has not achieved maturity yet. We keep going on...
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I agree that God can whisper the desire for peace in men and thus achieve a war-free world. It is not God that is limited but man's evolution and current vibrational presence that has not achieved maturity yet. We keep going on...
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
Our God is the only wise God and ruler of the universe. When two or more join together in prayer, God will hear. The world is watching an praying. Your poem is calling for a War Free World, and as you say, "God can."
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Our God is the only wise God and ruler of the universe. When two or more join together in prayer, God will hear. The world is watching an praying. Your poem is calling for a War Free World, and as you say, "God can."
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent Poem Dedicated to Wise Men to Act for Peace.
I do believe there will be peace on earth someday (a time when God chooses). I pray for the day when men don't make war anymore will come and we can live our lives dedicated to God's glory. Love definitely is the answer but sadly there is an evil force in the world as well.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent Poem Dedicated to Wise Men to Act for Peace.
I do believe there will be peace on earth someday (a time when God chooses). I pray for the day when men don't make war anymore will come and we can live our lives dedicated to God's glory. Love definitely is the answer but sadly there is an evil force in the world as well.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
I think all of us right now are hoping and praying for a solution to the current problem with Putin. We already have enough tension between races and 'classes' and everything else. Thanks for sharing a positive message!
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ALD,
I think all of us right now are hoping and praying for a solution to the current problem with Putin. We already have enough tension between races and 'classes' and everything else. Thanks for sharing a positive message!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from tfawcus
A poem that abides by the restrictive contest rules while putting forward your personal view of the matter in hand. A war free world would be much to be desired. A Utopian ideal.
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A poem that abides by the restrictive contest rules while putting forward your personal view of the matter in hand. A war free world would be much to be desired. A Utopian ideal.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022