A story about Little Miss Bossy
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Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your children's poem, nice flow, nice rhymes, and great message for the kids. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your children's poem, nice flow, nice rhymes, and great message for the kids. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and review.
Comment from Bridge
A beautiful poem. I love children's rhyming poems. This one tells a story too. The poem flows well and the lesson the poem has is very important. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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A beautiful poem. I love children's rhyming poems. This one tells a story too. The poem flows well and the lesson the poem has is very important. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you Bridge. Lovely review, always appreciated.
Comment from Fleedleflump
There's a lovely flow and a bouncy, fun rhythm all the way through this. Totally on board with the messages.
One tiny thought - 'don't care a toss' - where I come from, tossing is slang for masturbation, so this phrase is way ruder here than you probably intended.
Mike
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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There's a lovely flow and a bouncy, fun rhythm all the way through this. Totally on board with the messages.
One tiny thought - 'don't care a toss' - where I come from, tossing is slang for masturbation, so this phrase is way ruder here than you probably intended.
Mike
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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My goodness, thank you for the "tiny thought" - I appreciate it, and have changed it a bit to avoid that expression. (Still learning new things ...!) I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it.
Comment from LisaD123
This is an entertaining and enjoyable poem. The rhyme gives the poem a sense of pace which enables the story to be understood by young children. I liked the fact that the lesson was there to be learned without getting in the way of the fun. Thanks for sharing such a great read.
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reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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This is an entertaining and enjoyable poem. The rhyme gives the poem a sense of pace which enables the story to be understood by young children. I liked the fact that the lesson was there to be learned without getting in the way of the fun. Thanks for sharing such a great read.
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Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you very much Lisa. I appreciate this encouraging review, and I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem to enter in this contest, it gives a couple of morals to play with, which is an excellent way to get them on task, and entertain them at the same time. Articulate, smooth, great rhyming to mark its poetic path, beautifully written, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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This is an excellent poem to enter in this contest, it gives a couple of morals to play with, which is an excellent way to get them on task, and entertain them at the same time. Articulate, smooth, great rhyming to mark its poetic path, beautifully written, good luck, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you Roy. I appreciate your very encouraging response and words.
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Most welcome