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Vignettes of my ancestors who made me who I am.

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Comment from zanya
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Well done getting this book written. I'm so looking forward to reading it -it's an intriguing point you make about how people are so easily forgotten unless the accomplish something significant - Good luck with your writing

 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you so much for the review and comments. I so pleased that you want to read it.
    Beth
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a good idea, Beth. What you said about the memories of us, only last as long as the person who knew us best is still living. Once that person has passed on, we permanently fade away. So now I have to think of a way to make sure people remember me in hundreds of years time. Hmm. Any suggestions, Beth? Lol. I'm looking forward to following this story of your family from way back, when they first arrived in what is now your country.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Have you had you DNA done? I am amazed that the many records that are out there. I know you aren't in this country but Ancestry seems to have the records for all the countries. If you are a member it is pretty easy to find out all about your family even if you only know one or to generations. I'm so glad you are interest in reading what I come up with. I hope my enthusiasm for this project does to peter out. I'm not through with my own family yet and some days I don't want to write.
reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 21-May-2022
    I haven't had my DNA done, I'll have to see where I can have it done. It sounds amazing.
    I know what you mean about not wanting to write some days, my addiction to writing has also waned a bit. But we have to keep going to keep our brains active!!! You'll do it, I know you will, xxx
Comment from Spitfire
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Good for you! Starting another project that I will be sure to follow. I like your observation that our memory doesn't last unless we do something notable.

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thanks for reading this and being willing to follow wherever it leads.
    Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
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History is only carried as far as an interested party is willing to take it. And sadly, the passed down stories are only as honest as the person who shared the adventures. I look forward to seeing where you'll take us. Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thanks Ric. I appreciate you willing to stick with this. I'll try to be truthful when it come to what I've known. It may be hard to learn much about some of the people further back. I did learn one in my family was tried for witchcraft in Salem. Luckily he only served time and wasn't burned at the stake. I think they only did that to the women.
    Beth
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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It sounds as though this will be an interesting book. I swear I don't know how you remember all this stuff. You seem to
have total recall! I love stories about the past. We are a young country and our ancestors sacrificed to make it what it is today. Write on, Dear. Nancy:)

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reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you Nancy. I don't know how much I can learn about those further back but we'll see. I appreciate you reading my post.
    Beth
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am eagerly waiting for these stories. I know I am going to enjoy them, plus you have a great way to tell stories. My only fear is while I'm traveling, I might miss one. LOL Sure hope not. Thank you for letting us know what's ahead.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you Barbara. I appreciate you reading them while you are around and they will be in my portfolio. I hope you have a wonderful time traveling. I which I could take off and go traveling.
    Beth
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the prologue of larger work.

The work highlights the genealogy specific motivations of the work and how it could serve as an undiluted historical compendium of the people the protagonist refers to be having the same DNA with him.

The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with self preservation.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you so much for reviewing this and for your comments.
    Beth
Comment from RodG
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I commend you for wanting to write about your family "pioneers." Looking into their past lives will require considerable research I'm sure. But what exactly do you wish to "preserve"? Will this be a series of stories about each family member? Is there a common theme? Are you exploring both sides of your family tree or just one?

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 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    I will explore everything I can find out about anyone who shares my DNA. I've started with those people I knew personal. I have three stories of my maternal and paternal grandparents. Do think the prologue is lacking information I should include?
    Beth
reply by RodG on 20-May-2022
    This appears to be more of a MEMOIR than a family history. Go on-line and Google Writing memoirs. You will find useful articles.
Comment from royowen
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Well done Beth, what an achievement my friend, you've done a mighty, episodically providing your biographical story, from snippets of your early days to your days as a young mum raising some feisty kids. But you've added to your family's history, and I'm sure it will be a huge success, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 20-May-2022


reply by the author on 20-May-2022
    Thank you Roy, I hope I can find enough to write about. I appreciate you hanging in there and reading it.
    Beth
reply by royowen on 20-May-2022
    Most welcome