Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I am so sorry, Ramona, for your loss. Your father meant so much to you, and he was indeed the king of your heart. Your four words are shocking and confronting when the reader realises that this was your dear father. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thank you Wendy. Your words are very kind.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It's such a nice thing when one's dad is their hero. I have two daughters who love me I know. It's something that I only experienced from my father when I was old enough to drink. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2022

Thank you Roy. Blessings to you.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I am so sorry for your loss. You used very good words and very good comments with a very nice picture. Thank you for sharing with us. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thank you so much for your kind words Teri.

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Excellent

Ramona, I'm so sorry for your loss!
I lost my father last year, aged 95, and my world turned upside down. He and my mom were my rock.
Your poem and picture are such a good tribute to your dad.
I believe in Heaven, Ramona, and I believe my parents are there. I hope you believe this about your father.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks Cindy, I am sorry for your loss too. I do believe in Heaven. I know he?s up up there now.

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 12-Jul-2022

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Comment from jessizero

Excellent

Your one-line poem was succinct and touching. I am so sorry for your loss. Your father really did resemble Elvis when he was young. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks so very much.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

My prayers and thoughts are with you. I find writing is therapeutic, I lost my husband April 18th and write to you from time to time. Excellent one poem about your Dad.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks so very much. I?m so sorry for your loss.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the One Line Poem contest.

I Beautiful poem about your dad. Wow, he really looked like elves, very handsome. Have you seen the new movie about Elvis? It's supposed to be very good.

I enjoyed reading it. I also enjoyed your unique style and well chosen words.

Good presentation Your writing flows naturally and it's easy to understand.

Good luck in the contest.
Well done.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason".- Novalis

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Gypsy, thanks so very much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am sorry for your loss Ramona and your feelings will be raw just now and your words of remembrance here are how you thought of him, your very own Elvis, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks so much Dolly.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Ramona,

Your 'Elvis' will be 'always on your mind.' May the 'wonder of your Dad' live in your heart and soul for the years to come. He would be proud of his daughter for sure.

Mark

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks so much for your kind words Mark.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I'm so sorry for your loss, Ramona. It's so sad when out parents pass. I miss mine terribly, mum and dad. Your dad did look like Elvis in that photo. Your father will always be with you, my friend, he lives on in your heart ane will never be too far away. Good luck in the contest. Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2022

Thanks so much Sandra.