haiku (lonely chickadee)
A Haiku for the club challenge15 total reviews
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good presentation picture- good word count and flows well- good connection between lines- your story paints a clear picture about your chickadee- cute - and her failure to find love- too sad -lol Good job
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I like your poem- good presentation picture- good word count and flows well- good connection between lines- your story paints a clear picture about your chickadee- cute - and her failure to find love- too sad -lol Good job
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
You've painted a touching scenario highlighting the loneliness of this little chickadee. Hope there will be a little sunshine in his future! A cute little female, perhaps?
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You've painted a touching scenario highlighting the loneliness of this little chickadee. Hope there will be a little sunshine in his future! A cute little female, perhaps?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, I too hope the sun will shine, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lancellot
Ah, poor little chickadee. Well, this was an unique Haiku. Normally we think of love as a human emotion but I don't think there is any evidence that animals do experience some of the same emotions. This is a good entry.
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Ah, poor little chickadee. Well, this was an unique Haiku. Normally we think of love as a human emotion but I don't think there is any evidence that animals do experience some of the same emotions. This is a good entry.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, that's sad! But your haiku fits the picture challenge very well. It is a chickadee and it does look forlorn that "the sun never shines" on his search for love!
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Oh, that's sad! But your haiku fits the picture challenge very well. It is a chickadee and it does look forlorn that "the sun never shines" on his search for love!
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, yes, I felt a bit sorry for the little fella so just went with it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, oh this poor chickadee. H/she searches for love, and I thought that the poor little bird was searching for food. Winter is very hard and dreary on birds. I hope this little one survives, and finds loves
in the springtime. Good format and lovely photo. As this is a haiku challenge, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Hello Kahpot, oh this poor chickadee. H/she searches for love, and I thought that the poor little bird was searching for food. Winter is very hard and dreary on birds. I hope this little one survives, and finds loves
in the springtime. Good format and lovely photo. As this is a haiku challenge, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2022
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Thank you very much, yes, when I saw the photo I felt a bit sorry for the poor bird and just went with it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot