Things I Want To Say
A final reflection16 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
This is one of those stories that smacks us in the face like a wet mop, the realities of living and passing on. Repercussions whichever way things go. Great writing. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This is one of those stories that smacks us in the face like a wet mop, the realities of living and passing on. Repercussions whichever way things go. Great writing. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your thoughts and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from jessizero
This was such a sweet, touching story. "Al Zeimer" made my breath catch in my throat. You really moved me. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This was such a sweet, touching story. "Al Zeimer" made my breath catch in my throat. You really moved me. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from Abilene Riley
It's too bad the things we realize only when it's too late. Though you are exceptionally lucky that you made it to old age before you felt 'overwhelmed for the first time' in your life. Good luck to you and yours.
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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It's too bad the things we realize only when it's too late. Though you are exceptionally lucky that you made it to old age before you felt 'overwhelmed for the first time' in your life. Good luck to you and yours.
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from humpwhistle
A touching story, if a bit maudlin. I suppose there are no new ways to face impending death, but I had hoped for something less typical. The mention of Al Zeimer feels a little cheesy given the tone of the rest of the piece. But that's just my opinion.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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A touching story, if a bit maudlin. I suppose there are no new ways to face impending death, but I had hoped for something less typical. The mention of Al Zeimer feels a little cheesy given the tone of the rest of the piece. But that's just my opinion.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and review. I appreciate them.
Comment from blondie560
What a lovely composition for your wife. I was tearing up as you described missed times with your family, while doing the very thing you wanted to do, which is take care of your family. It's a catch-22 for sure, but it sounds like you all came through it and remain a family. I hope God blesses you with many more years waking up beside your wife.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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What a lovely composition for your wife. I was tearing up as you described missed times with your family, while doing the very thing you wanted to do, which is take care of your family. It's a catch-22 for sure, but it sounds like you all came through it and remain a family. I hope God blesses you with many more years waking up beside your wife.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind words, review, and stars. I appreciate them.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This was great fiction that sounds real. It makes me wonder, did my husband think this way about our marriage before he died? Thank you for sharing this post.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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This was great fiction that sounds real. It makes me wonder, did my husband think this way about our marriage before he died? Thank you for sharing this post.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind words, review, and stars. I appreciate them.
