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Comment from Karyn2
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Debi, this gives me such a beautiful glimpse into your family and world! What a special treasure to have family so close and even more than that the love you all share. Which is no surprise when you are such a lovely and welcoming person Debi!! I would be so honoured to have a poem such as this written of me. The words are so heartfelt and honest. You have such a knack of story telling within your rhyme and meter it is just wonderful to read.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Karyn, Ithank you for your very sweet review and comments for my poem about Melanie! You remind me of her! I appreciate it so much, my dear friend!
Comment from bob cullen
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What a delightful write to your daughter-in-law. Wish I had a mum-in-law like you. How's that for sucking up. Truly though, this is a beautiful write. I hope you showed it to her.
Love the sound and planning of the bridge. Bet the Grandkids use it regularly.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Bob. So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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The image of the metaphor of "Bridge" is all encompassing in this account. You enhance the characters with sweet metaphors. This is very poignant. Nice expressed.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Liz, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
reply by Liz O'Neill on 08-Jan-2023
    ***Hugs***
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is so beautiful both in verse, presentation and
especially a heartfelt tribute from a mother-law to her daughter-in-law.
I truly enjoyed reading.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 08-Jan-2023
    Hi Mary, So sorry this is so late. A lot going on right now that got a little overwhelming. I thank you for you kind review and comments for Melanie's poem.
    I sure appreciate it my friend
Comment from Wendy G
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How fabulous that you live next door to each other and have such a wonderful and loving relationship. What a lovely blessing for you all. Your poem expresses your love for her and your joy int hat special bond.
Wendy

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Wendy I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem, Mel. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a very affectionate poem of tribute. My favorite lines were: His smile said it all, that you were the one
And as time went by, you'd complete us. I think you can capitalize grandma's in this line:
To grandma's, for playtime & more
That is just because it would be what the grandsons are calling you personally. But if you said "To their grandma's, for playtime and more" then you wouldn't need to capitalize it.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Crystie, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. Thank you too for your gracious feedback. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Raul1
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This is a sweet and wonderful poem for your daughter in law and so many wonderful memories you have with her. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Raul, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Write Right Writer
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This is lovely, Debi...

I feel like I'm getting to know your entire family and am so happy that they are close with you (and I imagine with each other). It's probably your heartfelt poems that bind your entire family together.

The MIL-DIL relationship is often tricky but it appears you (and Mel) have navigated it with grace and aplomb. And the bridge over the creek story is priceless. What a great "connecting" point for your family.

Thanks for writing. Thanks for sharing.

Blessings...

Curt (WRW)

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Curt, as always, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem, Mel.. It's so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from LateBloomer
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Oh Debi, this poem is absolutely beautiful. I can feel the love that you have for Melanie and the pride and joy that their family has brought to you. I especially liked:

I love you as if, you were my very own
A daughter, you are in my eyes

(Debi, you and your family have been blessed. They make a handsome couple.)

Silky rhyming. Beautiful photo. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. I'm sorry that this poem got buried in my email.
Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M




 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
    So do you think Jason resembles me? I always kinda hoped so. It. would be nice to have one kid take after me. Anyway sweet sister, thanks for your lovely comments about - mel's poem. also my keyboard is crazy today that's why i looks such a mess,
Comment from aryr
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What an amazing picture, Debi. Your words spoke of so much love. I am so glad that they married and produced two wonderful grandsons. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
    Ali, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much for your lovely review and kind words for my poem Mel.. It's so appreciated, my dear friend! 'Debi
reply by aryr on 05-Jan-2023
    Most welcome, Debi.