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Comment from JT traveller
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Lucy Chan certainly means business. Your descriptive prose allowed so much to be conveyed to the reader in so few words. Never an easy task when there is a word limit.

Congratulations and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it.
reply by JT traveller on 12-Feb-2023
    My pleasure.
Comment from jessizero
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"Lunging toward her, Lucy shot twice." makes it sound like Lucy was doing the lunging. "As he lunged toward her, Lucy shot twice" might sound better, but it might affect your word count.
Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
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Silly old burglar, you'd think he was a bit smarter than he was, I think if I was confronted by a gun, I think I'd defer to caution in that case. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy


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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023
    Thank you for your thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
reply by royowen on 12-Feb-2023
    Most welcome