Dear God
My note to the Big Guy25 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Nailed it, saved for "by dad." You meant that to be "my dad," no?
And I thought my 13 operations were challenging, but none were life threatening. IN addition, I spent ten in the military during Vietnam. Lucky are those that returned. I was safely far from there plotting, analyzing weather maps for B-52 flying out of the P.I. and Guam.
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Nailed it, saved for "by dad." You meant that to be "my dad," no?
And I thought my 13 operations were challenging, but none were life threatening. IN addition, I spent ten in the military during Vietnam. Lucky are those that returned. I was safely far from there plotting, analyzing weather maps for B-52 flying out of the P.I. and Guam.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Tom. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Earl. You expressed
your thoughts and feels well. I enjoyed reading your letter. It
read smoothly with pertinent examples of how thankful you
were to God. I liked how you included seeing your mom and
fgrandparents and your son who was serving in the army.
Also, the war in the Ukraine needs His help desperately.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Earl. You expressed
your thoughts and feels well. I enjoyed reading your letter. It
read smoothly with pertinent examples of how thankful you
were to God. I liked how you included seeing your mom and
fgrandparents and your son who was serving in the army.
Also, the war in the Ukraine needs His help desperately.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Jan. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from royowen
I don't think you need to worry with your example of a letter to God, you mentioned the contentment and thankfulness to God, your selfless and undemanding prayer was humble and articulate making your petitions clear and concise. Well done, Earl, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : the same about (by) dad. My?
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I don't think you need to worry with your example of a letter to God, you mentioned the contentment and thankfulness to God, your selfless and undemanding prayer was humble and articulate making your petitions clear and concise. Well done, Earl, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : the same about (by) dad. My?
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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Well done
Comment from Bill Schott
I don't know why people have givn up letter writing, when it gives us such a good format for gathering our thoughts and counting our blessings. This was a great example of such a letter to God. Nice.
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I don't know why people have givn up letter writing, when it gives us such a good format for gathering our thoughts and counting our blessings. This was a great example of such a letter to God. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Bill. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, so many of us have plenty of things to be thankful for, and even those of us who take time out to pray, could find even a few more details to our thoughts if we write them down. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Yes, so many of us have plenty of things to be thankful for, and even those of us who take time out to pray, could find even a few more details to our thoughts if we write them down. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from damommy
What you "came up with" (your words) is lovely. We don't have to have long and flowery speeches to talk to God. Just to be ourselves, and always faithful. Good luck in the contest.
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What you "came up with" (your words) is lovely. We don't have to have long and flowery speeches to talk to God. Just to be ourselves, and always faithful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Dear Earl, how you have been blessed in this life so far, and I'm sure there will be more. You did a wonderful job with this letter to God. Have a blessed day and good luck in the contest. Shirley
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Dear Earl, how you have been blessed in this life so far, and I'm sure there will be more. You did a wonderful job with this letter to God. Have a blessed day and good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Shirley. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I continue to pray for God's will to help our country out. We're in a huge mess. Good luck with the contest.
When I pray I ask you to fill my needs and if you have
time to fill my needs. (This sentence seems redundant to me.)
I know that I have had a spotty record (you can omit 'that')
But You and I fooled them didn't we Lord? (comma needed after 'them')
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I continue to pray for God's will to help our country out. We're in a huge mess. Good luck with the contest.
When I pray I ask you to fill my needs and if you have
time to fill my needs. (This sentence seems redundant to me.)
I know that I have had a spotty record (you can omit 'that')
But You and I fooled them didn't we Lord? (comma needed after 'them')
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Good catches. Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from jmdg1954
One never can he sure of voters or how a committee may look at an entry.
Earl,
I thought yours was one of the better entries I've read. It was warm, spoken from the heart and thankful for what He has provided you.
I see no room for change or improvement.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
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One never can he sure of voters or how a committee may look at an entry.
Earl,
I thought yours was one of the better entries I've read. It was warm, spoken from the heart and thankful for what He has provided you.
I see no room for change or improvement.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for the six stars John. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
Comment from Sally Law
Virtual six for this precious prayer to God, Earl. You did an exceptional job and we're respectful and honest at the same time. Many that I have read seem to be lacking the awe of a holy God. He is, after all, Lord of Heaven and Earth.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
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Virtual six for this precious prayer to God, Earl. You did an exceptional job and we're respectful and honest at the same time. Many that I have read seem to be lacking the awe of a holy God. He is, after all, Lord of Heaven and Earth.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much Sal. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work.
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Most welcome. Best wishes.
