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Dear Wayne

A letter from God

16 total reviews 
Comment from Jay Squires
Excellent
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Ha! I don't see how anyone can take your story wrong since it comes from the pen of someone with an obviously well-developed sense of humor and you keep the reader smiling even when he/she ponders your humor's deeper meaning. I think this will be right up there at the top without any help, but I guess a little good luck wouldn't hurt too, so have a bit of that from me to you, as well.

Jay

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you for an awesome review.
Comment from eliz100
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I enjoyed this letter better than the one you wrote to God. I remember some questions about God in your letter to God. In this, God's letter to you, you open up about your spirituality. I do not see any room for improvement.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your fabulous review.
    You are right. This letter from God is not a response to the letter 'to' God, but a different (unposted) one.
    Thank you immensely for the six stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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This is inventive and amusing and I wonder if God gave you six stars for your original letter as He seemed to enjoy your prose Wayne. You have me in stitches here even though some of it is not meant to be funny, a magical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    You have my wife and I LOLing! Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wayne, this is an exceptional work of fiction. I would say woe to anyone who thinks it is sacrilegious. Common sense, humor, humility, and love all of these are found in your letter. Thank you for entering the contest. Terry.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your very, very kind review!
    And blessings on you for the six stars!
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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I admire your bravery in writing this. I would be worried I'd be struck by lightning. LOL. Just kidding. I enjoyed your letter from God. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    LOL - really, I did!
    Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This was an extremely telling piece I found. Telling of your view of yourself, and telling of your conception of God. I very much enjoyed both the order in which you placed your requests and the discussion concerning this - very amusing. kay

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2023
    Thank you.
    I had concerns about posting it. Some may not be able to engage with the humor that I inject and I don't want to offend. But...
    (smiley face here)