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JT traveller
In a mere eighty words you have managed to build tension and excitement. Also, you have left the reader teetering...wondering what is to come next. A fantastic flash fiction write. Not an easy thing to pull off. Well done.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
Thank you. I appreciate your review and comments.
reply by JT traveller on 14-Mar-2023