Acrostic (a little boy found)
A Site Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good acrostic for the contests, and I do wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed listening to it and your presentation is very nice. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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This is a very good acrostic for the contests, and I do wish you the best in the contest. I enjoyed listening to it and your presentation is very nice. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Happy endings can come true for one and all.
She was able turn her life around for the good of the child raising him as her very own giving him a chance at life after being thrown away by some one.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Happy endings can come true for one and all.
She was able turn her life around for the good of the child raising him as her very own giving him a chance at life after being thrown away by some one.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, yes it turned out well, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from Wendy G
I liked this story in a poem and also even more cleverly in an acrostic poem. Just one thing though: Is "emersed" a word? Was wondering if it should be "immersed" but that would spoil the acrostic. Unless you clain "poetic licence". Any way I like the poem very much , and send best wishes for the acrostic contest
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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I liked this story in a poem and also even more cleverly in an acrostic poem. Just one thing though: Is "emersed" a word? Was wondering if it should be "immersed" but that would spoil the acrostic. Unless you clain "poetic licence". Any way I like the poem very much , and send best wishes for the acrostic contest
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, this is why I try to read reviews early, as I know mistakes will be there, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Glad to be of help. I think it's better now!!
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I changed again, again thank you for helping
Comment from Ricky1024
This is an Acrostic poem and also, contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
I gave it six stars because it had meaning and these things actually do been but rarely.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a great day!!
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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This is an Acrostic poem and also, contest entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
I gave it six stars because it had meaning and these things actually do been but rarely.
Good luck with your contest entry and have a great day!!
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you ever so much Ricky1024, I have written to Tom, as inadvertently you sent this twice and I don't want you to lose the chance of awarding six stars to another, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from JT traveller
An outstanding acrostic poem. To read that it was based on a true story makes it more incredible.
A symbiosis was formed that day. I was happy to read the conclusion of your poem, the two became family.
Thank you for sharing this story. The truth is always stranger than fiction. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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An outstanding acrostic poem. To read that it was based on a true story makes it more incredible.
A symbiosis was formed that day. I was happy to read the conclusion of your poem, the two became family.
Thank you for sharing this story. The truth is always stranger than fiction. Jacqueline
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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It was a beautiful poem and story behind it.