Ancient Art of Poetry
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Comment from Paul Manton
Hello again, Lea. We've met several times now and I really like your work. I also realise that you sometimes have problems with words which are homophones, and there might be lots of reasons for that. (I hope that this comment can only be seen by you and me, but if not I won't mention this again.) The word you put in line two is 'courtesy' and you may have wanted 'curtsy' instead? If I'm wrong, I apologise. 2-4-2 is the hardest of all, so you did brilliantly.
Best wishes, Paul
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello again, Lea. We've met several times now and I really like your work. I also realise that you sometimes have problems with words which are homophones, and there might be lots of reasons for that. (I hope that this comment can only be seen by you and me, but if not I won't mention this again.) The word you put in line two is 'courtesy' and you may have wanted 'curtsy' instead? If I'm wrong, I apologise. 2-4-2 is the hardest of all, so you did brilliantly.
Best wishes, Paul
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much again Paul yeah I did change that definitely. It's billing thank you for that appreciate it always do. I appreciate your comments and your interest and your attention to my work. I am privileged and honored thank you very much of your day's great!
Comment from JSD
Too small a box for me to attempt but you have done this really well using an interesting idea and some unusual vocabulary. Replete is particularly good. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Too small a box for me to attempt but you have done this really well using an interesting idea and some unusual vocabulary. Replete is particularly good. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much i'm glad you liked this one appreciate you you're targeting to your comments on your inside as well. Also you're fine with you and you're rating. I thank you for that as well I hope your day is great!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
As simple, as beautiful, and as magnificent as the flowers themselves. A very nicely written poem. Keep up the great work. You're a very good poet. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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As simple, as beautiful, and as magnificent as the flowers themselves. A very nicely written poem. Keep up the great work. You're a very good poet. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much glad you liked! For your review and fine comments I thank you! Have a great night!thank you
Comment from royowen
There is nothing quite as beautiful as the flower, a symbol of so many happy and not so happy things, a great entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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There is nothing quite as beautiful as the flower, a symbol of so many happy and not so happy things, a great entry in this 2/4/2 poetry contest, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you Roy! I'm glad u liked it! Thanks for your kind review and your comments all appreciated by me! Have a great night!
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My pleasure
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are a really a good poet. I like your usage of the word "replete" and your use of personification by using "nodding". Over all, it's a very beautiful poem.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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You are a really a good poet. I like your usage of the word "replete" and your use of personification by using "nodding". Over all, it's a very beautiful poem.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
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Thank you I'm really glad you like. It always means a lot to me and for your kind words and your review and your time like gold. Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A vibrant presentation Lea and I love the colours and the fresh flowers nodding in their full resplendent velvet petals, I wish you luck in the contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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A vibrant presentation Lea and I love the colours and the fresh flowers nodding in their full resplendent velvet petals, I wish you luck in the contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you again! Nice to have something uplifting! I adore bright colors makes me smile! I appreciate you Dolly!
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a beautiful poem for the contest. Your imagery and visuals are very refreshing, presentation is stunning.
You fit a lot in these three lines. Loved that pink color, so fitting.
Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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That is a beautiful poem for the contest. Your imagery and visuals are very refreshing, presentation is stunning.
You fit a lot in these three lines. Loved that pink color, so fitting.
Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank so much! I'm so glad you like it! For your time, your kind words and fine review I'm grateful! Have a awesome day!
