Crossroads
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, poor Robert will need to mend his ways if he is to earn a place in Heaven! Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness, poor Robert will need to mend his ways if he is to earn a place in Heaven! Ha ha ha, you made me smile here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
Comment from jessizero
Eek! This was creative and you used your words well. The thought of spending time in Hell, even with the possibility of getting out after five years, is terrifying. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Eek! This was creative and you used your words well. The thought of spending time in Hell, even with the possibility of getting out after five years, is terrifying. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2023