Wake Up, Daddy
It wasn't my first choice for how to wake up15 total reviews
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great story, funny and full of movement and action. The writing is clear and the descriptions very sharp. The ending has a funny twist and as we say in French : tout est bien qui finit bien "
All's well that ends well.
Note: you might want to correct the French word, it should be "naturel "
Great job!!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Great story, funny and full of movement and action. The writing is clear and the descriptions very sharp. The ending has a funny twist and as we say in French : tout est bien qui finit bien "
All's well that ends well.
Note: you might want to correct the French word, it should be "naturel "
Great job!!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your great review.
I even looked it up! (naturel)
Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! You dragged us out in the ice cold weather and the low fuel tank of gas and no sleep only to be woken up by the misunderstanding of "being on fire"? Poor guy. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Oh no! You dragged us out in the ice cold weather and the low fuel tank of gas and no sleep only to be woken up by the misunderstanding of "being on fire"? Poor guy. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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smiley face here
Thank you!
Comment from shelley kaye
great ending - didn't expect any quiche to be spelled! she must've hit a triple word score LOL
excellent story for the sentence!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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great ending - didn't expect any quiche to be spelled! she must've hit a triple word score LOL
excellent story for the sentence!
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your fun review.
Comment from pome lover
well, that was just too cute. I love "crispy critter." But, I know it was a vey
frustrating time. And would it have killed the principal to say he was sorry you'd gone for nothing?
Anyway, you tell a story entertainingly. Enjoyed it!
Katharine
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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well, that was just too cute. I love "crispy critter." But, I know it was a vey
frustrating time. And would it have killed the principal to say he was sorry you'd gone for nothing?
Anyway, you tell a story entertainingly. Enjoyed it!
Katharine
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review.
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you're welcome
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the prompt! Your crazy story went in all kinds of directions, and I enjoyed them all. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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You did a great job with the prompt! Your crazy story went in all kinds of directions, and I enjoyed them all. Thanks so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you. LOL
smiley face here