Comment from Evelyn Hopkins

Excellent

Well written and brings the emotion out. Love the imagery and imagination you possess. I would suggest maybe adding a colorful background and an image to go along with your poem! I think it would help bring out the images you have created in the poem! ;)

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Thank you for the great review, Evelyn. This is actually a story rather than a poem. Stories don't have background colors on here. It has an image already. Poems have background color but stories usually don't. I don't know what might be the problem if you don't see the image of the woman on the horse. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again.

reply by Evelyn Hopkins on 22-Apr-2023

Sorry about that, I think there was a glitch or something!

reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023

Hopefully the picture's up there now.

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Ron