Smitten:Bitten
One good bite deserves another13 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
So I assume it was all the dogs fault. LOL Yes we do tend to spoil our pets and it is usually the one who is with them the most who does the spoiling. This was a fun write Wayne, well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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So I assume it was all the dogs fault. LOL Yes we do tend to spoil our pets and it is usually the one who is with them the most who does the spoiling. This was a fun write Wayne, well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you. No one has (as of yet) blamed either human.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent script in which this court room case is transcribed in convincing detail albeit concerning a legal suit not normally heard in this court. The matter about loss of intimacy caused by a dog has humour involved from the start. This in turn builds as the partners are questioned at length until the final finger of blame seems to be squarely pointing at Fido, a clever dog with a plan! And Dale's intimacy abstinence is over. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Excellent script in which this court room case is transcribed in convincing detail albeit concerning a legal suit not normally heard in this court. The matter about loss of intimacy caused by a dog has humour involved from the start. This in turn builds as the partners are questioned at length until the final finger of blame seems to be squarely pointing at Fido, a clever dog with a plan! And Dale's intimacy abstinence is over. Good luck in the contest! Debbie
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness, but this is a saucy one. I had fun reading this and forgot to check for errors, but I didn't notice any.
Nice work on this and good work in the upcoming contest, my friend!
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Oh my goodness, but this is a saucy one. I had fun reading this and forgot to check for errors, but I didn't notice any.
Nice work on this and good work in the upcoming contest, my friend!
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
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Hah! I guess a little sauce gets errors overlooked!
thank you for the fun review.
